Gifts— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不自然。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用简单句表达原因。

Example: Yes, I am good at giving gifts because I always consider what the person likes. Sometimes, I even ask them directly to make sure they will like the gift.

Suggestion: 回答含糊不清，语句不完整，缺乏逻辑。建议明确回答时间点，并用完整句子表达。

Example: I usually give gifts to others on their birthdays. For example, I often give a special gift to my mother on Mother's Day.

Suggestion: 回答不完整且语法错误严重，表达不清晰。建议用完整句子说明考虑因素，并举例说明。

Example: When I choose a gift, I pay more attention to its practicality. I prefer gifts that the receiver can use for a long time.

Suggestion: 回答语句断裂，表达混乱。建议用完整句子描述经历，并说明手工礼物的内容。

Example: Yes, when I was in primary school, I made handmade cards for my friends. I wrote congratulatory messages on the cards.

Suggestion: 回答不连贯，语法错误多，表达不清。建议用简单句表达观点，并说明原因。

Example: Yes, I think expensive gifts can better express my feelings because they show how much I appreciate the person.

× I'm really good at giving gifts because I will send to others depends on there and what they like and sometimes I will ask them directly about a.

✓ I'm really good at giving gifts because I send to others depending on where they are and what they like, and sometimes I ask them directly about it.

句中 'depends' 应使用动名词形式 'depending'，表示动作的进行；'there' 应为 'where they are'，表示地点；'will send' 改为一般现在时 'send'，符合习惯表达；'about a' 不完整，改为 'about it'。

× I'm really good at giving gifts because I will send to others depends on there and what they like and sometimes I will ask them directly about a.

✓ I'm really good at giving gifts because I send to others depending on where they are and what they like, and sometimes I ask them directly about it.

'others' 用法正确，表示复数；无复数错误。此处无复数错误。

× I'm really good at giving gifts because I will send to others depends on there and what they like and sometimes I will ask them directly about a.

✓ I'm really good at giving gifts because I send to others depending on where they are and what they like, and sometimes I ask them directly about it.

'depends on there' 中 'there' 用法错误，应使用 'where they are' 来表示地点。

× Up. Most the time I will give to others in their birthday and uh, I will send another gift to my mother in the, UM, moms, moms and.

✓ Most of the time, I give gifts to others on their birthdays, and I also send another gift to my mother on Mother's Day.

句子结构混乱，'Up.' 无意义，应删除；'Most the time' 应为 'Most of the time'；'in their birthday' 应为 'on their birthdays'；'in the, UM, moms, moms and' 表达不清，改为 'on Mother's Day'。

× Up. Most the time I will give to others in their birthday and uh, I will send another gift to my mother in the, UM, moms, moms and.

✓ Most of the time, I give gifts to others on their birthdays, and I also send another gift to my mother on Mother's Day.

'in their birthday' 应使用介词 'on'，表示具体日期；'in the, UM, moms, moms and' 介词使用错误，应为 'on Mother's Day'。

× Pay more attention about the practical. Who received you saw a long term?

✓ I pay more attention to practicality. Who receives it will use it for a long term.

'Pay more attention about' 应为 'pay more attention to'；'the practical' 应为名词形式 'practicality'；'Who received you saw a long term?' 句子不通，改为 'Who receives it will use it for a long term'。

× Pay more attention about the practical. Who received you saw a long term?

✓ I pay more attention to practicality. Who receives it will use it for a long term.

'Pay attention about' 介词错误，应为 'pay attention to'。

× In my primary school I all. Others the. Card is Italian made which I made it and the right wrote down something. Congrats.

✓ In my primary school, I gave others cards that I made by hand, and I wrote down something like 'Congrats'.

'I all. Others the.' 句子不完整，应改为 'I gave others cards'；'Card is Italian made' 应为 'cards that I made by hand'；'the right wrote down' 应为 'I wrote down'；时态应为过去时。

× In my primary school I all. Others the. Card is Italian made which I made it and the right wrote down something. Congrats.

✓ In my primary school, I gave others cards that I made by hand, and I wrote down something like 'Congrats'.

'Italian made' 用词错误，应为 'handmade' 或 'made by hand'。

× In my primary school I all. Others the. Card is Italian made which I made it and the right wrote down something. Congrats.

✓ In my primary school, I gave others cards that I made by hand, and I wrote down something like 'Congrats'.

'which I made it' 中 'which' 和 'it' 重复，应去掉 'it'。

× Yes, it is icing expensive gifts that are implied expressed my feelings because the value of the. Restart my. I appreciate it and the. Anne.

✓ Yes, giving expensive gifts better expresses my feelings because of their value. I appreciate it and so do they.

'icing expensive gifts' 词序错误，应为 'giving expensive gifts'；'implied expressed' 用词错误，应为 'better expresses'；句子不完整，需补充完整表达。