Gifts— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you think so with specific reasons.

Example: Yes, I believe I'm good at giving gifts because I always appreciate my friends on their birthdays. I think giving gifts is a good way to maintain and strengthen our friendship.

Suggestion: Improve grammar and sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'also' to connect ideas smoothly. Avoid filler words like 'uh'.

Example: I usually give gifts during big events. For example, when I travel abroad and come back, I bring souvenirs for my friends and family. Also, I give gifts on their birthdays.

Suggestion: Make your answer clearer and more coherent by using complete sentences and linking words. Explain what you mean by 'value' with specific details.

Example: When choosing a gift, I consider whether it suits the person. My family and friends are not interested in expensive gifts; instead, I focus on the meaningful value of the gift.

Suggestion: Avoid unclear or incorrect phrases. Be direct and clear in your response. Explain your preference with reasons to enrich your answer.

Example: No, I have never given a handmade gift because I prefer to give valuable gifts that I think the person will appreciate more.

Suggestion: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Express your opinion clearly with supporting reasons.

Example: No, expensive gifts do not better express my feelings. As I mentioned, I don't care about the price but rather whether the gift suits the person I am giving it to.

× Yes, I think I'm good at giving gifts becauses every birthday of my friends I appreciate them and give them gifts because I think it is a good move. To keep the friendship.

✓ Yes, I think I'm good at giving gifts because every birthday of my friends, I appreciate them and give them gifts because I think it is a good move to keep the friendship.

The word 'becauses' is incorrect; it should be 'because'. Also, the sentence fragment 'To keep the friendship.' should be connected to the previous sentence for clarity and correctness.

× I usually doing this uh in the big events.

✓ I usually do this, uh, in big events.

The verb 'doing' is incorrectly used after 'usually'. The correct form is the base verb 'do' after 'usually' to indicate habitual action.

× When I travel abroad and coming back, I will give my friends or my family souvenir and as I mentioned also in their birthdays.

✓ When I travel abroad and come back, I will give my friends or my family souvenirs, and as I mentioned, also on their birthdays.

The phrase 'and coming back' should be parallel to 'travel', so 'come back' is correct. Also, 'souvenir' should be plural 'souvenirs' to match the context. Preposition 'on' is used with 'birthdays'.

× I consider the choosing a gift suits my. My family or my friends not interested in purchasing expensive gift or not, but I depend on the value of this gift.

✓ I consider choosing a gift that suits my family or my friends. They are not interested in purchasing an expensive gift or not, but I depend on the value of the gift.

The phrase 'the choosing a gift suits my' is incorrect; it should be 'choosing a gift that suits my family or my friends'. Also, 'expensive gift' needs an article 'an'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× No, no, I think I didn't eat at all, but I prefer to give them.

✓ No, no, I think I haven't made any, but I prefer to give them.

The phrase 'I didn't eat at all' is incorrect in this context; likely the intended meaning is 'I haven't made any' (handmade gifts). 'Eat' is incorrect here.

× Valuable gift for them.

✓ A valuable gift for them.

The noun 'gift' requires an article 'a' when singular and countable.

× No, because as I said, I don't care about. How much of the gift but I care about? Is that gifts with the person that I? Will give it to him or it is not.

✓ No, because as I said, I don't care about how much the gift costs, but I care about the person to whom I will give it.

The original sentence is fragmented and incorrectly punctuated. It should be combined into a clear sentence. 'How much of the gift' is incorrect; it should be 'how much the gift costs'. The phrase 'gifts with the person that I will give it to him or it is not' is unclear and corrected to 'the person to whom I will give it'.