Gifts— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and a bit repetitive. Try to be more direct and concise. Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: I am not very good at giving gifts because I often find it hard to decide what to choose. For example, when I want to give something to my mother, I get confused between different options.

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words. Avoid informal phrases like 'and all' and 'yeah, that's it'.

Example: I usually give gifts on special occasions such as birthdays and weddings. Additionally, sometimes I give gifts spontaneously when I want to surprise someone with something special.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Try to complete your sentences and provide specific reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Example: When choosing a gift, I consider the person's likes and dislikes because it is important to select something they will appreciate. For instance, if I know someone likes books, I might buy a novel for them.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Avoid informal language and incomplete sentences. Provide clear reasons and examples with proper linking words.

Example: No, I have never given a handmade gift because I am not good at making things. Instead, I prefer to give special gifts or cook a meal for someone I care about.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and incomplete. Use correct grammar and complete your thoughts. Express your opinion clearly with supporting reasons and linking words.

Example: I do not agree that expensive gifts better express feelings. I believe that the thought behind the gift is more important than its price because meaningful gifts are remembered longer.

× I don't think I am good at giving gifts because whenever I try to give gift to my special moms then I can't decide either I choose these or that.

✓ I don't think I am good at giving gifts because whenever I try to give gifts to my special moms, I can't decide whether I choose these or those.

The word 'gift' should be plural 'gifts' to match the context of giving multiple gifts. Also, 'either I choose these or that' is incorrect; it should be 'whether I choose these or those' to correctly express the choice between plural items.

× I don't think I am good at giving gifts because whenever I try to give gift to my special moms then I can't decide either I choose these or that.

✓ I don't think I am good at giving gifts because whenever I try to give gifts to my special moms, I can't decide whether I choose these or those.

The pronouns 'these' and 'that' are mismatched in number; 'these' is plural and 'that' is singular. Both should be plural ('these' or 'those') to maintain consistency.

× Sometimes I give to them occasionally, like their birthdays or their weddings and all, and other time whenever I like to give them something special, then I try to gift something really cool.

✓ Sometimes I give to them on occasions like their birthdays or weddings, and other times whenever I want to give them something special, I try to gift something really cool.

The phrase 'give to them occasionally, like their birthdays or their weddings and all' is awkward. The preposition 'on' is needed before 'occasions'. Also, 'other time' should be 'other times' and 'whenever I like' should be 'whenever I want' for clarity and correctness.

× I consider peoples like and dislikes because I think it is the most important thing to choose a gift for someone.

✓ I consider people's likes and dislikes because I think it is the most important thing when choosing a gift for someone.

'Peoples' is incorrect; the correct possessive form is 'people's'. Also, 'like and dislikes' should be 'likes and dislikes' to correctly refer to preferences.

× If I choose something bad then it is not appreciable for me because gift is something which.

✓ If I choose something bad, then it is not appreciated by me because a gift is something special.

The sentence is incomplete and awkward. 'Not appreciable for me' is incorrect; it should be 'not appreciated by me'. Also, 'gift is something which' is incomplete and needs completion or rephrasing.

× No, I have never given others a handmade gift because I'm really bad at this kind of stuff and I think it is not my fault.

✓ No, I have never given anyone a handmade gift because I'm really bad at this kind of stuff and I think it is not my fault.

'Others' is incorrect here; 'anyone' is the appropriate pronoun to refer to people in this context.

× If they love someone then I try to cook us.

✓ If they love someone, then I try to cook for them.

The pronouns 'us' and 'someone' are misused. 'Cook us' is incorrect; it should be 'cook for them' to indicate cooking for the people referred to.

× In my opinion I am not agree with this line because I think gift is something which people will remember or by me by my name which is a very special things to give someone.

✓ In my opinion, I do not agree with this statement because I think a gift is something that people will remember, or remember me by my name, which is a very special thing to give someone.

'I am not agree' is incorrect; it should be 'I do not agree'. 'Things' should be singular 'thing' to match the context. The sentence is also restructured for clarity.

× So it is not matter for me either it is.

✓ So it does not matter to me either way.

'It is not matter' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'it does not matter'. Also, 'either it is' is incomplete and unclear; 'either way' is a better expression.