Gifts— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法の誤りや冗長な表現が見られます。例えば、「before I giving gifts」は「before I give gifts」に修正し、同じ内容の繰り返しを避けるとより自然になります。

Example: Actually, I'm not very good at giving gifts because I find it difficult to figure out what people really want.

Suggestion: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が不明瞭な部分があります。例えば、「on when my friend's birthday」は「on my friend's birthday」に修正し、最後の文は意味が通じるように整理しましょう。

Example: I usually give gifts on my friends' birthdays. Especially, I think it's important to give a special present to my girlfriend on her birthday.

Suggestion: 内容は良いですが、文法ミスと不自然な表現があります。「whether gift suits them」は「whether the gift suits them」にし、「we have to I have to check the size or taste of their」は「I have to check their size and taste」に修正しましょう。

Example: I always consider many things, but one important factor is whether the gift suits the person. For example, if I give clothes, I have to check their size and taste.

Suggestion: 回答は理解できますが、文法と表現を改善するとより自然になります。「only once I give the artworks for my mother or my Mother's Day」は「I have only given artwork to my mother once, on Mother's Day」に修正しましょう。

Example: No, I have never given handmade gifts because I'm not good at making things. However, I have given my mother a drawing once on Mother's Day.

Suggestion: 意味は伝わりますが、文法と語順の誤りが多いです。「how long time you use to choose a gift」は「how much time you spend choosing a gift」にし、「choose to cheap present」は「choose a cheap present」に修正しましょう。

Example: I don't think expensive gifts express feelings better. I believe the time you spend choosing a gift matters more, but it's also not good to choose a very cheap present.

× I have to figure out what people want before I giving gifts.

✓ I have to figure out what people want before I give gifts.

The verb 'giving' is incorrectly used after 'I'. After 'I', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'give' is correct here.

× I think this action is most difficult.

✓ I think this action is the most difficult.

The sentence is missing the definite article 'the' before 'most difficult' to form the superlative correctly.

× Most difficult points to give gifts.

✓ The most difficult part of giving gifts.

The original sentence is a fragment and lacks a verb and subject. It should be rephrased to a complete sentence.

× I usually give gifts on when my friend's birthday, something like that.

✓ I usually give gifts on my friend's birthday, or something like that.

The preposition 'on' should be directly followed by the time expression without 'when'.

× Especially I think it is very important to give a big present on my girlfriend's birthday.

✓ Especially, I think it is very important to give a big present on my girlfriend's birthday.

A comma is needed after 'Especially' to separate the introductory adverb from the main clause.

× I wanna make my friend lot of friends very.

✓ I want to make many friends for my friend.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'Wanna' should be 'want to', and 'lot of friends very' is incorrect phrasing.

× I always consider a lot of things, but one of them is whether gift suits them.

✓ I always consider a lot of things, but one of them is whether the gift suits them.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'gift' to specify it.

× For example, if I give clothes as a gift, we have to I have to check the size or taste of their.

✓ For example, if I give clothes as a gift, I have to check their size or taste.

The sentence has redundant and misplaced pronouns. 'We have to I have to' is incorrect; it should be 'I have to'. Also, 'size or taste of their' should be 'their size or taste'.

× However, I like drawing pictures, so only once I give the artworks for my mother or my Mother's Day.

✓ However, I like drawing pictures, so I only once gave artworks to my mother for Mother's Day.

The verb tense should be past tense 'gave' to match the past event. Also, 'for my mother or my Mother's Day' is awkward; it should be 'to my mother for Mother's Day'.

× Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

✓ Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× I think how long time you use to choose a gift is better than that point.

✓ I think the amount of time you spend choosing a gift is more important than that.

The original sentence is awkward and ungrammatical. 'How long time you use' should be 'the amount of time you spend', and 'better than that point' is unclear.

× But I think it is not good that you choose to cheap present.

✓ But I think it is not good to choose a cheap present.

The phrase 'choose to cheap present' is incorrect. It should be 'choose a cheap present'.