Gifts— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to give a clear and direct answer first, then support it with specific reasons. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and repetition. Use more natural phrasing and keep the answer concise within 5 sentences.

Example: Yes, I enjoy giving gifts because it makes the recipient feel appreciated and happy. For example, when I give a thoughtful present to someone important, it strengthens our relationship and shows I care.

Suggestion: Provide a clear topic sentence and use linking words to organise your answer. Avoid hesitation and incomplete sentences. Be specific about occasions for different people.

Example: I usually give gifts on birthdays, but for teachers, I prefer to give presents on Teachers' Day. As for my parents, I like to surprise them on special occasions like anniversaries.

Suggestion: Avoid hesitation and unclear statements. Give a clear structure with linking words and explain your points fully. Use appropriate vocabulary to express your ideas clearly.

Example: When choosing a gift, I first consider the recipient's preferences and interests. Then, I think about what I personally find suitable. Overall, I believe that a thoughtful gift reflects the effort you put into selecting it.

Suggestion: Try to speak clearly and avoid grammatical errors. Use correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Provide a clear answer with supporting details and avoid repetition.

Example: Yes, I have given handmade gifts, but only to my daughter because I am not confident in my crafting skills. I feel shy to give handmade gifts to others as they might seem awkward, but my daughter appreciates them because she knows they come from my heart.

Suggestion: Avoid hesitation and incomplete sentences. Provide a clear opinion and support it with examples. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and use appropriate vocabulary.

Example: Sometimes, expensive gifts can express feelings, especially in professional settings where companies give costly presents. However, in personal occasions, I believe that thoughtful gifts, regardless of price, better show your feelings.

× I, I would say I'm a huge fan of a gift because I, I think if I can give a good gift to important person, they, the person will feel very happy when he or she received a very, uh, you know, gorgeous gift.

✓ I, I would say I'm a huge fan of gifts because I, I think if I can give a good gift to an important person, they, the person will feel very happy when he or she receives a very, uh, you know, gorgeous gift.

The phrase 'a gift' should be plural 'gifts' to express general liking. 'Important person' needs the article 'an' before it. Also, 'received' should be 'receives' to agree with the present tense context and subject-verb agreement.

× For me I always choose to give gifts during their birthday time and but for teachers it's quite different. I will give a gifts uh during teachers day and the parents also are different.

✓ For me, I always choose to give gifts during their birthday time, but for teachers it's quite different. I will give gifts during Teachers' Day and the parents' occasions are also different.

The phrase 'a gifts' is incorrect; 'gifts' should be plural without 'a'. Also, 'teachers day' and 'parents' need possessive apostrophes to indicate the day or occasion belonging to them.

× Uh, first, I will, uh, consider the recipient's preference and interests. Second, I will, uh, think about my taste of gifts. Overall, I think, uh, every, uh, gift you, you, you pay.

✓ Uh, first, I will consider the recipient's preferences and interests. Second, I will think about my taste in gifts. Overall, I think, uh, every gift you give matters.

'Preference' should be plural 'preferences' to match 'interests'. 'Taste of gifts' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'taste in gifts'. The last sentence is incomplete and unclear; 'every gift you pay' is incorrect and should be 'every gift you give matters' to convey meaning.

× MMM I remember that I only gave my daughters my handmade gift because I'm not a handmade gift good maker.

✓ MMM I remember that I only gave my daughters my handmade gifts because I'm not good at making handmade gifts.

'My daughters' should be plural possessive and 'handmade gift' should be plural 'handmade gifts' to match context. The phrase 'handmade gift good maker' is ungrammatical; it should be 'good at making handmade gifts'.

× I feel shy to give a awkward handmade gift to other body.

✓ I feel shy to give an awkward handmade gift to other people.

'A awkward' is incorrect; 'an awkward' is correct because 'awkward' starts with a vowel sound. 'Other body' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'other people' or 'others'.

× But my daughter is quite different because I love her and he know.

✓ But my daughter is quite different because I love her and she knows.

'He know' is incorrect pronoun and verb form; it should be 'she knows' to agree with 'my daughter'.

× Sometimes, sometimes maybe, uh, especially in working occasion, uh, experts gifts always could express our companies feelings, But uh, in personal occasion, I think it's quite different.

✓ Sometimes, sometimes maybe, uh, especially on working occasions, uh, expert gifts can always express our company's feelings, but uh, in personal occasions, I think it's quite different.

'In working occasion' should be 'on working occasions' as 'on' is used with occasions and 'occasion' should be plural. 'Experts gifts' should be 'expert gifts' (adjective form). 'Companies feelings' should be 'company's feelings' with possessive apostrophe. 'In personal occasion' should be 'in personal occasions'.

× If, if, if you are thoughtful, I think the gift is a.

✓ If, if, if you are thoughtful, I think the gift is meaningful.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly with 'the gift is a.' It needs a proper complement to complete the thought, such as 'meaningful'.