Gifts— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, tự nhiên hơn.

Example: Yes, I think I am good at giving gifts because I always try to choose something suitable for the person to make their special occasion memorable.

Suggestion: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp số nhiều và số ít ("that occasions" nên là "those occasions"). Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ.

Example: I usually give gifts on special occasions such as birthdays or graduations because these are moments when people feel happy and appreciate congratulations.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lặp từ. Bạn nên sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và chú ý ngữ pháp ("something that appropriate" nên là "something appropriate").

Example: I consider whether the gift is appropriate and useful for their daily life because I want to give them something meaningful and practical.

Suggestion: Bạn nên chú ý đến số nhiều và số ít ("favorite thing" nên là "favorite things") và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tự nhiên hơn. Thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

Example: Yes, I have. Handmade gifts are my favorite because I put a lot of effort into them, which shows my love and care for the receiver.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có nhiều từ ngữ không cần thiết và lỗi ngữ pháp ("appreciated to you" nên là "is appreciated by you" hoặc "you appreciate"). Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng.

Example: No, I don't think expensive gifts express feelings better. What matters is the love and thought behind the gift, not its price.

× But I'm not sure but it gets so because I always try to find a gift that's suitable for the person that receive it because I want them to receive the best on their special occasion.

✓ I'm not sure, but it is so because I always try to find a gift that's suitable for the person who receives it because I want them to receive the best on their special occasion.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'but' twice consecutively, which is redundant and confusing. Also, 'that receive it' should be 'who receives it' to correctly refer to the person receiving the gift. Use 'but' only once to connect contrasting ideas and use 'who' for people as relative pronoun with correct verb agreement.

× Mostly on their special occasions, for example birthday party or graduation, because that occasions is when they are really happy.

✓ Mostly on their special occasions, for example birthday parties or graduations, because those occasions are when they are really happy.

The sentence has singular/plural mismatches: 'birthday party' and 'graduation' should be plural to match 'occasions'. Also, 'that occasions is' is incorrect; it should be 'those occasions are' to agree in number and demonstrative pronoun.

× Definitely something that appropriate for them because I want to give them the best and the most suitable gifts and first of all I will find something that useful for them to use in daily life.

✓ Definitely something that is appropriate for them because I want to give them the best and most suitable gifts, and first of all, I will find something that is useful for them to use in daily life.

The adjective 'appropriate' and 'useful' need the verb 'is' to form correct relative clauses ('that is appropriate', 'that is useful'). Also, a comma is needed before 'and' to separate clauses properly.

× Oh well yes, that's one of my favorite thing because I feel like when I made them a gift by myself, I put so much effort in it so the receiver will know about my love and care for them.

✓ Oh well yes, that's one of my favorite things because I feel like when I made them a gift by myself, I put so much effort into it so the receiver will know about my love and care for them.

'One of my favorite thing' should be 'one of my favorite things' because 'one of' is followed by a plural noun. Also, 'put so much effort in it' should be 'put so much effort into it' as the correct preposition with 'effort' is 'into'.

× Well, definitely not, because I think that, umm, giving gifts is a way to express how much the other person, uh, appreciated to you.

✓ Well, definitely not, because I think that, umm, giving gifts is a way to express how much the other person appreciates you.

The phrase 'appreciated to you' is incorrect. The verb 'appreciate' should be in present tense 'appreciates' to agree with 'the other person' and the preposition 'to' is unnecessary. The correct form is 'appreciates you'.