Gifts— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: คำตอบของคุณควรตรงประเด็นและชัดเจนมากขึ้น ใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์และหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำที่ไม่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'keeping gifts' ควรใช้ 'giving gifts' และควรอธิบายเหตุผลอย่างชัดเจนโดยใช้ประโยคที่เชื่อมโยงกันอย่างเหมาะสม

Example: No, I'm not very good at giving gifts because I often find it difficult to choose something meaningful. However, I believe good communication is more important in relationships than giving presents.

Suggestion: คำตอบควรมีโครงสร้างที่ชัดเจนและใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อให้ประโยคสมบูรณ์และเข้าใจง่าย ควรระบุช่วงเวลาหรือโอกาสที่ชัดเจนในการให้ของขวัญ

Example: I usually give gifts on special occasions like birthdays or graduations, especially to artists or close friends.

Suggestion: ควรใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์และชัดเจนมากขึ้น อธิบายเหตุผลในการเลือกของขวัญโดยใช้คำเชื่อมและคำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม

Example: When choosing a gift, I consider whether it is cute and suitable for the person who will receive it.

Suggestion: คำตอบควรมีโครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้องและชัดเจน ใช้คำกริยาในรูปแบบที่ถูกต้อง และอธิบายรายละเอียดของของขวัญที่ทำด้วยมืออย่างชัดเจน

Example: Yes, I have given handmade gifts before. For example, I painted a glass cup as a gift for my friends when they graduated.

Suggestion: ควรใช้ประโยคที่ชัดเจนและมีโครงสร้างที่ถูกต้อง อธิบายความคิดเห็นของคุณเกี่ยวกับของขวัญราคาแพงและความรู้สึกที่ต้องการสื่อสารอย่างชัดเจน

Example: I don't think expensive gifts are necessary to express feelings. What matters most is the thought and appreciation behind the gift.

× I'm not good at keeping gifts.

✓ I'm not good at giving gifts.

The verb 'keep' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'give' when talking about presenting gifts. The '-ing' form is used correctly after 'good at'.

× I just know more people have a good communication with other people.

✓ I just know more people have good communication with others.

The phrase 'a good communication' is incorrect because 'communication' is an uncountable noun and does not take 'a'. Also, 'other people' is better expressed as 'others' here.

× But I didn't think about give something to other people because in real life, if we make it good, everything will be good.

✓ But I didn't think about giving something to other people because in real life, if we make it good, everything will be good.

After 'think about', the verb should be in the '-ing' form, so 'give' should be 'giving'.

× Actually, when I give gifts to artists, maybe have something special such as birthday or graduate from university sometime I will do that, but all through.

✓ Actually, when I give gifts to artists, it is usually for something special such as a birthday or graduation from university; sometimes I will do that, but not always.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure. 'Maybe have something special' is unclear and needs a subject and verb. 'Graduate from university' should be 'graduation from university'. 'All through' is unclear and replaced with 'not always' for clarity.

× Just look at that thing, if it's cute and made for the person who I need to send give exactly, I will buy it.

✓ I just look at the item; if it's cute and made for the person I want to give it to, I will buy it.

The phrase 'the person who I need to send give exactly' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'the person I want to give it to'. Also, 'look at that thing' is vague; 'look at the item' is clearer.

× I had do that before I gave some handmade to my friends when they graduation that time I create a class the glass of tea just painting a color put in the.

✓ I have done that before. I gave some handmade gifts to my friends when they graduated. At that time, I created a glass of tea by painting colors on it.

'I had do' is incorrect; it should be 'I have done'. 'When they graduation' should be 'when they graduated'. The sentence is fragmented and unclear; it needs to be split and clarified.

× For me is not important, is expensive or not expensive, everything can express my feeling is bad for other people need to send feel good to me that I am really appreciate.

✓ For me, it is not important whether a gift is expensive or not; everything can express my feelings. It is bad when other people need to send gifts to make me feel good, but I really appreciate it.

The original sentence has pronoun and subject issues. 'For me is not important' needs 'it' as subject. 'My feeling is bad for other people need to send feel good to me' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects pronoun use.