Gifts— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Answer wa, motto shizen de tadashii eigo wo tsukatte, chotto nagai bun wo hitsuyou ijou tsukawanai you ni shite kudasai. Tatoeba, 'Yes, I think I am good at giving gifts, especially to my close friends and family. I try to choose gifts that they will really appreciate.' to iu fuu ni kotaeru to yoi desu.

Example: Yes, I think I am good at giving gifts, especially to my close friends and family. I try to choose gifts that they will really appreciate, so they feel happy and valued.

Suggestion: Kotae ga fukuzatsu de, imi ga wakari nikui desu. Motto seikaku ni, shizen na eigo de kotaete kudasai. Tatoeba, 'I usually give gifts on special occasions or when I want to cheer someone up.' to iu fuu ni shite kudasai.

Example: I usually give gifts on special occasions like birthdays or holidays, or when I want to cheer someone up and make their day better.

Suggestion: Kotae ga fukuzatsu de, bunpou to eigo no shizen-sa wo koujou saseru hitsuyou ga arimasu. Tatoeba, 'When I choose a gift, I think about what the person needs and what they will like.' to iu fuu ni kotaete kudasai.

Example: When I choose a gift, I think about what the person needs and what they will like, so the gift is useful and appreciated.

Suggestion: Kotae ga nagaku, kotoba no kurikaeshi ga arimasu. Motto seikaku de shizen na eigo de, rikai shi yasui you ni kotaete kudasai. Tatoeba, 'Yes, I gave my girlfriend a handmade silver bracelet because she lost hers and I wanted to cheer her up.' to iu fuu ni shite kudasai.

Example: Yes, I gave my girlfriend a handmade silver bracelet because she had lost hers, and I wanted to cheer her up with a special gift.

Suggestion: Kotae ga fukuzatsu de, bunpou to eigo no shizen-sa wo koujou saseru hitsuyou ga arimasu. Tatoeba, 'I think expensive gifts are not important. What matters is how useful or meaningful the gift is.' to iu fuu ni kotaete kudasai.

Example: I think expensive gifts are not important. What matters is how useful or meaningful the gift is to the person.

× Well, I'm pretty good at giving present to someone.

✓ Well, I'm pretty good at giving presents to someone.

The word 'present' should be plural 'presents' because it refers to gifts in general, which is countable and usually plural in this context.

× I do not give it repeatedly, but when I give to the closest or dearest person, they appreciate it very very much.

✓ I do not give gifts repeatedly, but when I give to the closest or dearest person, they appreciate them very much.

The sentence had unclear pronoun references and awkward phrasing. 'It' should be 'gifts' and 'they appreciate it' should be 'they appreciate them' to agree with plural 'gifts'. Also, 'very very much' is redundant; 'very much' is sufficient.

× So I like.

✓ So I like it.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object. Adding 'it' completes the sentence meaningfully.

× That is not such a question.

✓ That is not such a difficult question.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'difficult' clarifies the meaning.

× While I gift while I while I gift, gift my dearest person, umm, I when I feel like I must give someone some present or make their day better or encourage and make them.

✓ When I gift my dearest person, I do so when I feel like I must give someone a present to make their day better or encourage them.

The original sentence is repetitive and fragmented. Rewriting it improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× While choosing a present, I usually prefer the necessity of that gift to the person whom I'm gifting it and how, how they will appreciate it and how how much and.

✓ While choosing a present, I usually consider the necessity of that gift for the person I'm giving it to and how much they will appreciate it.

The phrase 'prefer the necessity of that gift to the person' is incorrect. 'Consider the necessity of that gift for the person' is correct. Also, the sentence was incomplete and repetitive.

× Yes, I have gifted my girlfriend a handmade, uh, bracelet that is made of, of uh, Chandi.

✓ Yes, I have given my girlfriend a handmade bracelet that is made of, uh, Chandi.

The verb 'gifted' is less common; 'given' is more natural in this context. Also, removing unnecessary fillers improves clarity.

× We, can we, we call it silver.

✓ We call it silver.

The phrase 'can we' is unnecessary and interrupts the sentence flow. Removing it corrects the sentence.

× Uh, she said she had lost, lost bracelets.

✓ Uh, she said she had lost her bracelets.

The repetition of 'lost' is an error. Also, adding 'her' clarifies possession.

× So I, that come in my mind and when I went to cheer it up, I'd give it to her.

✓ So that came to my mind, and when I went to buy it, I gave it to her.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Correcting verb tenses and word choice improves clarity.

× I believe expensive gift does not count that much because I go for the necessity of the object or gift that I'm trying that.

✓ I believe an expensive gift does not count that much because I go for the necessity of the object or gift that I'm trying to give.

'Expensive gift' needs an article 'an' because it is singular countable noun. Also, the sentence was incomplete and needed correction for clarity.

× I'm trying to gift it gifting to the person so it doesn't matter about the money it.

✓ I'm trying to give it to the person, so it doesn't matter how much money it costs.

The phrase 'trying to gift it gifting' is incorrect and redundant. Replacing with 'trying to give it' and clarifying the latter part improves grammar and meaning.