Gifts— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan agak membingungkan. Cobalah untuk memberikan jawaban yang langsung dan jelas dengan struktur yang baik, serta hindari kalimat yang tidak lengkap atau salah tata bahasa.

Example: I'm not very good at giving gifts. I usually just give simple presents to people I care about, but I want to improve how I choose and give gifts.

Suggestion: Jawaban Anda mengandung pengulangan dan tata bahasa yang kurang tepat. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dan jelas, serta gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren.

Example: I usually give gifts on special occasions, such as birthdays of close friends or family members. For example, when it's someone's birthday, I like to give them a present to celebrate.

Suggestion: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup jelas, namun ada pengulangan dan kalimat yang kurang lancar. Cobalah untuk menggunakan kalimat yang lebih alami dan menghubungkan ide dengan kata penghubung.

Example: When choosing a gift, I mainly consider the price first. Then, I think about the quality and whether the gift is trendy or suitable for the person.

Suggestion: Jawaban Anda kurang lengkap dan ada kalimat yang tidak selesai dengan baik. Cobalah untuk memberikan jawaban yang lebih lengkap dan menggunakan kalimat yang jelas serta terstruktur.

Example: No, I have never given a handmade gift. I usually prefer to buy gifts either online or in stores. For example, I often go to supermarkets or shopping centers to pick suitable presents.

Suggestion: Jawaban Anda mengandung pengulangan dan kalimat yang kurang jelas. Cobalah untuk menyusun kalimat yang lebih sederhana dan jelas, serta hindari pengulangan kata.

Example: Not really. I believe that sincerity is more important than the price of a gift. A personalized gift shows more care than an expensive one.

× I just give some gift to another person.

✓ I just give some gifts to other people.

The word 'gift' should be plural 'gifts' because 'some' indicates more than one. Also, 'another person' is singular, but the context suggests multiple recipients, so 'other people' is more appropriate.

× Forgive that I'd like to give to them.

✓ Forgive me, but I'd like to give to them.

The phrase 'Forgive that' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'Forgive me' to ask for pardon. Also, 'I'd like to give to them' is acceptable but needs the correct introductory phrase.

× Usually on the special day or in a special in any special occasion.

✓ Usually on special days or on any special occasion.

'The special day' should be plural 'special days' to generalize. Also, 'in a special in any special occasion' is incorrect; it should be 'on any special occasion' because we use 'on' with days and occasions.

× when someone that close to me have a birthday I will likely to give, I would like to give them some present.

✓ When someone who is close to me has a birthday, I would like to give them some presents.

The subject 'someone' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' not 'have'. Also, 'that close to me' should be 'who is close to me'. 'I will likely to give' is incorrect; 'I would like to give' is correct. 'Some present' should be plural 'some presents'.

× And also is it up to date to the trend or not and kind of that.

✓ Also, is it up to date with the trend or not, and things like that.

The phrase 'up to date to the trend' is incorrect; it should be 'up to date with the trend'. 'And kind of that' is informal and unclear; 'and things like that' is better.

× No, I never.

✓ No, I never have.

The sentence is incomplete. To express that the person has never done something, 'I never have' or 'I have never' is correct.

× I prefer to buy somewhere online or offline.

✓ I prefer to buy something online or offline.

The word 'somewhere' refers to a place, but the context requires 'something' to refer to an object or item.

× For instance, when I'm going to a supermarket or going to shopping center to buy a gift, I will easily pick some certain things to consider as a present for.

✓ For instance, when I'm going to a supermarket or shopping center to buy a gift, I will easily pick certain things to consider as a present.

'Going to shopping center' needs an article: 'going to a shopping center'. Also, 'some certain things' is redundant; 'certain things' is sufficient. The phrase 'to consider as a present for' is incomplete; 'to consider as a present' is correct.

× Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

✓ Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

This sentence is grammatically correct and does not require correction.

× It's the sincerity that matters a lot because the expensive 1 is not assigned to express our love or demonstrate our care.

✓ It's the sincerity that matters a lot because the expensive one is not meant to express our love or demonstrate our care.

The phrase 'the expensive 1' is informal and incorrect; it should be 'the expensive one'. 'Is not assigned to' is incorrect; 'is not meant to' is appropriate.

× It's rather than it's rather than the how the president is customized to that person actually.

✓ It's more about how the present is customized for that person, actually.

The original sentence is confusing and repetitive. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects 'president' to 'present' and uses proper prepositions.