Gifts— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally relevant but contains some redundancy and grammatical errors. Try to be more concise and correct in grammar. Also, avoid repeating the same idea twice, like mentioning your brother was elated and then he praised you, which is similar. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I enjoy giving gifts to my family and close friends. Recently, I bought a present for my younger brother, and he was very happy to receive it.

Suggestion: Your answer has some repetition and grammatical mistakes, such as 'she is a fond of dolls' and 'I always purchase him doll every weekend' which is unclear. Be careful with pronouns and verb forms. Also, avoid contradicting statements like giving gifts on special occasions but then buying dolls every weekend. Use linking words to clarify your points.

Example: I usually give gifts on special occasions like birthdays or festivals. For instance, I recently bought a doll for my younger sister because she loves playing with dolls.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct tenses. Also, avoid redundancy like 'in a in a right way'. Use linking words to organize your answer logically.

Example: When choosing a gift, I consider its quality and functionality. I prefer to select something that is useful and well-made.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear but can be improved by correcting grammar and making sentences more natural. For example, 'I always try my best in giving' can be 'I always try my best to give'. Also, avoid unnecessary repetition and use linking words to connect ideas.

Example: I often try to give handmade gifts to my close friend Dipasha. Last year, I made a handmade bag for her birthday, and she really loved it.

Suggestion: Your answer tries to express a balanced opinion but is a bit confusing due to grammar and phrasing. Try to state your opinion clearly and use simpler sentences. Also, use linking words to explain your reasoning logically.

Example: I believe that expensive gifts do not always express feelings better. What matters more is the willingness and thought behind the gift, not its price.

× I always give gifts to my family member as well as to my close friends.

✓ I always give gifts to my family members as well as to my close friends.

The word 'member' should be plural 'members' because it refers to more than one person in the family. When talking about more than one, use the plural form.

× Recently, I have bought a new gift to my younger brother who was very elated.

✓ Recently, I bought a new gift for my younger brother who was very elated.

The present perfect tense 'have bought' is less appropriate here with 'recently' in spoken context; simple past 'bought' fits better. Also, the preposition 'to' is incorrect; 'for' is used when giving gifts to someone.

× Recently, I have bought a new gift to my younger brother who was very elated.

✓ Recently, I bought a new gift for my younger brother who was very elated.

The correct preposition to use with 'buy a gift' is 'for' when indicating the recipient, not 'to'.

× I usually give gifts to other on special occasions.

✓ I usually give gifts to others on special occasions.

The word 'other' should be 'others' to refer to other people, and the preposition 'to' is correctly used here.

× However, she is a fond of dolls.

✓ However, she is fond of dolls.

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before 'fond' which is an adjective. 'Fond' does not require an article.

× I always purchase him doll every weekend.

✓ I always purchase her a doll every weekend.

The pronoun 'him' is incorrect because the subject is the younger sister (female), so 'her' should be used. Also, the article 'a' is needed before 'doll'.

× I considered a lot of things recently.

✓ I consider a lot of things recently.

Since 'recently' suggests a recent or ongoing action, present tense 'consider' is more appropriate to match the context.

× I am a very choosy person also.

✓ I am also a very choosy person.

The adverb 'also' should be placed before the adjective phrase for correct emphasis and natural word order.

× I always get a gift when the gift is properly full functioning as well as the quality of gift is is very high and in a in a right way.

✓ I always get a gift that is fully functional and of very high quality, and it is given in the right way.

The original sentence is awkward and contains repetition and incorrect phrases. 'Properly full functioning' should be 'fully functional'; 'quality of gift is is very high' should be 'of very high quality'; 'in a in a right way' should be 'in the right way'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.

× I prepared a handmade bag which she loved on her birthday.

✓ I prepared a handmade bag that she loved for her birthday.

The relative pronoun 'that' is more appropriate here, and the preposition 'for' is used to indicate the occasion of the birthday.

× I always try to use these type of bags.

✓ I always try to use this type of bag.

'These' is plural but 'type' is singular; the correct phrase is 'this type of bag'.

× To me, buying expensive gifts are not the main source of their feelings towards another, so there should be a great and good willingness to do another without giving expensive gifts.

✓ To me, buying expensive gifts is not the main source of their feelings towards others, so there should be great willingness to do so without giving expensive gifts.

'Buying expensive gifts' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' not 'are'. 'Another' is incorrect here; 'others' is appropriate. 'A great and good willingness' is redundant; 'great willingness' suffices. 'To do another' is unclear; 'to do so' is better.