Gifts— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Speak more fluently and clearly, avoid hesitations and repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Also correct verb tense and word choice (e.g., 'I often know' not 'I'm I often knew').

Example: Yes, I am good at giving gifts. I usually find out what my friends like by asking their close friends or observing their hobbies, so I can choose something they will actually use.

Suggestion: Organize the answer: give a clear topic sentence, then specific examples, and avoid filler words and repeated phrases. Use correct tense (I buy, not I bought) and linking words like 'sometimes' and 'other times'.

Example: It depends. Sometimes I give gifts on special occasions like birthdays or Valentine's Day, but other times I buy small presents for my friends on ordinary weekdays to surprise them.

Suggestion: Be concise and precise: start with a topic sentence naming the main factors, then give 2–3 specific details with linking words. Use correct pronouns and prepositions (consider the price, whether it is suitable for him or her).

Example: When choosing a gift, I consider the price, the recipient's taste, and how useful it will be. For example, if they like crafts I might choose a handmade item that is attractive and practical.

Suggestion: Reduce repetition and improve grammar. Give a clear topic sentence then 2–3 specific examples with linking words. Use correct forms (handmade gifts, crochet items, a bag they can use for years).

Example: Yes, I often give handmade gifts. For instance, I crochet dolls and bags myself, and I have also sewn shirts for some friends, which they can wear for many years.

Suggestion: Provide a clear opinion sentence and support it with a specific reason and example. Avoid redundancy and incorrect phrasing (express my feelings, rather than 'brought my feelings'). Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example'.

Example: No, I don't think expensive gifts express feelings better. I believe a thoughtful or homemade gift can show more care because it reflects the giver's effort; for example, I give my friends handmade items that show I spent time thinking about them.

× Yes I do because I'm I often knew what my friends want and prefer giving them a gift.

✓ Yes, I am, because I often know what my friends want and prefer, so I like giving them gifts.

Student mixed past and present tenses ('knew' is past) and has extra words. Use present tense 'know' to match 'I am' and habitual action. Also fix word order and plural 'gifts'. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual facts and remove redundant words.

× I will I will ask their friends or surround the people to know what things they will need or they like in.

✓ I will ask their friends or the people around them what things they need or like.

Redundant repetition ('I will I will') and awkward phrase 'surround the people'. Use 'people around them' and change 'will need' to 'need' for future intention expressed by 'I will ask'. Also remove unnecessary 'in'. Keep parallel structure 'need or like'.

× I it depends, sometimes I'll give them on their birthday or some or some day like Valentine's Day or or something and sometimes I just bought a gift just for them in a simple weekday.

✓ It depends. Sometimes I give them gifts on their birthday or on days like Valentine's Day, and sometimes I just buy a gift for them on an ordinary weekday.

Mixed pronouns and tenses ('I it depends', 'I'll' vs 'bought'). Use consistent present simple for habits ('I give', 'I buy'). Remove repeated words and use 'ordinary weekday' instead of 'simple weekday'. Ensure correct prepositions 'on their birthday' and 'on days like'.

× Most of the time I will consider about the price and the gift.

✓ Most of the time I will consider the price and the gift.

Verb 'consider' does not use 'about' when followed by a direct object. Remove 'about'. Also keep parallel structure for 'price and the gift'.

× Is it suitable for he or she?

✓ Is it suitable for him or her?

Use object pronouns after preposition 'for'. 'He' and 'she' are subject forms; 'him' and 'her' are correct as objects. Suggestion: use 'them' for gender-neutral singular.

× I love to make homemade gift.

✓ I love to make homemade gifts.

'Gift' should be plural when speaking generally ('homemade gifts') or use an article 'a homemade gift'. Also 'homemade' + plural noun is common for general statements.

× For example I will give my friend some crochet that made by myself.

✓ For example, I give my friend some crochet items that I made myself.

Missing subject in the relative clause; use 'that I made myself'. 'Crochet' as a noun needs 'items' or 'pieces'. Use present simple for habitual action and add comma after introductory phrase.

× I give them a a doll or a you a bag that can use forever and some people I give them a a shirts that I made in myself.

✓ I give them a doll or a bag that can be used for a long time, and to some people I give shirts that I made myself.

Remove duplicate 'a a' and incorrect 'you a bag'. Use passive 'can be used' or 'that will last a long time'. 'Shirts' plural for general statement. 'Made in myself' is incorrect; use 'made myself'.

× I don't think so.

✓ I don't think so.

Sentence is correct; no change needed. (Included to indicate no grammatical error.)

× In my opinion, I think a gift which is suitable and which is special and it's is enough for a for a gift to express or to elaborate my thought.

✓ In my opinion, a gift that is suitable and special is enough to express my feelings.

Remove redundancy ('I think', 'which', 'it's is', repeated 'a for a'). Use 'that' for defining clauses and concise structure 'is enough to express my feelings'. Replace 'elaborate my thought' with 'express my feelings' which is natural in this context.

× For example, I give my friends my homemade items and I think this is brought my feelings as well.

✓ For example, I give my friends my homemade items, and I think this shows my feelings as well.

'Brought my feelings' is incorrect verb choice; use 'shows' or 'conveys'. Add comma before conjunction. Use 'shows my feelings' to express meaning clearly.