Money— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cevabınızda daha doğal ve akıcı ifadeler kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, cümle yapılarınızı basit ve doğru tutarak, gereksiz tekrarları önlemelisiniz. Örneğin, "I borrowed money from my friend once because I didn't have enough money to meet my girlfriend" gibi daha net ve anlamlı cümleler kurabilirsiniz. Bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlelerinizi birbirine bağlamanız da faydalı olur.

Example: Yes, I have borrowed money from my friends before. For example, once I didn't have enough money to meet my girlfriend, so I asked a friend to lend me some. He kindly agreed without hesitation.

Suggestion: Cevabınızda daha açık ve düzenli cümleler kurmalısınız. Ayrıca, gereksiz tekrarları ve karışıklıkları önlemek için cümlelerinizi sadeleştirin. Örneğin, "Yes, I have lent money to others when they needed help because I like to be helpful" gibi net ve anlamlı ifadeler kullanabilirsiniz. Bağlaçlarla cümlelerinizi daha tutarlı hale getirin.

Example: Yes, I have lent money to others when they needed it. I believe helping friends financially when possible is important, so I usually try to support them.

× I think one time I don't have money because for a meet my girlfriend I borrowed money from my friend.

✓ I think one time I didn't have money because to meet my girlfriend I borrowed money from my friend.

The sentence incorrectly uses the present tense 'don't have' when referring to a past event. The correct past tense form is 'didn't have'. Also, 'for a meet my girlfriend' is incorrect; it should be 'to meet my girlfriend' to express purpose.

× I asked him can you bro, can you give me the money?

✓ I asked him, 'Can you bro, can you give me the money?'

The sentence lacks proper punctuation and structure for reported speech. It should include quotation marks or be rephrased to correctly report the question.

× Yes, I did, because when I have some money when someone ask to me too he need money or is she he Needham need money I lent it to him or her because it's helpful.

✓ Yes, I did, because when I have some money and someone asks me if he or she needs money, I lend it to him or her because it's helpful.

The sentence has incorrect pronoun usage and awkward phrasing. 'Ask to me' should be 'asks me', and 'he need money or is she he Needham need money' is unclear and incorrect. It should be 'if he or she needs money'. Also, verb agreement and sentence clarity need improvement.

× I'm helpful.

✓ I'm helpful.

Although 'I'm helpful' is grammatically correct, in this context it is unclear and unnecessary. It might be better to omit or clarify this sentence.