Money— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: In your answer, try to speak more clearly and use complete sentences. Also, avoid unnecessary pauses and make sure your grammar is correct. For example, say 'I used to borrow money from my sisters because I didn't have a job and needed money to pay for my studies.'

Example: Yes, I used to borrow money from my sisters because I didn't have a job at that time and needed money to pay for my studies.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and has many grammatical errors. Try to organize your thoughts and use simple, clear sentences. For example, say 'Yes, I have lent money to my friends because I thought it would help our relationship, and I believed they really needed it.'

Example: Yes, I have lent money to my friends because I thought it would help our relationship, and I believed they really needed it.

× Yes, I used to borrow some money from my. Sisters, because back then. I didn't have a job and I need some money to board sample to self studies.

✓ Yes, I used to borrow some money from my sisters because back then I didn't have a job and I needed some money to buy some materials for self-studies.

The pronoun 'my' was incorrectly separated from 'sisters' and capitalized unnecessarily. Also, 'need' should be in past tense 'needed' to match the past context. 'Board sample to self studies' is unclear and likely a mishearing; corrected to 'buy some materials for self-studies' for clarity.

× Yes, I used to borrow some money from my. Sisters, because back then. I didn't have a job and I need some money to board sample to self studies.

✓ Yes, I used to borrow some money from my sisters because back then I didn't have a job and I needed some money to buy some materials for self-studies.

The verb 'need' should be in past tense 'needed' to agree with the past time frame indicated by 'used to' and 'didn't have'. This maintains tense consistency in the sentence.

× Yes, I have let some money to my friends because I thought that. If I. Give them some money is constrain our relationship.

✓ Yes, I have lent some money to my friends because I thought that if I gave them some money, it would strain our relationship.

The verb 'let' is incorrect here; the correct past participle of 'lend' is 'lent'. Also, 'my friends' should not be separated. The phrase 'If I give them some money is constrain our relationship' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'if I gave them some money, it would strain our relationship' to express a conditional past situation.

× Yes, I have let some money to my friends because I thought that. If I. Give them some money is constrain our relationship.

✓ Yes, I have lent some money to my friends because I thought that if I gave them some money, it would strain our relationship.

The verb 'give' should be in past tense 'gave' to match the past conditional context. Also, the sentence structure requires 'it would strain' to express the hypothetical effect properly.

× And back there I thought she was in and eat. Half my knee.

✓ And back then, I thought she was in need of help.

The original sentence is unclear and contains nonsensical phrases like 'in and eat. Half my knee.' which appear to be transcription errors. Corrected to a meaningful sentence that fits the context: 'I thought she was in need of help.' This correction improves clarity and sentence structure.