Money— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不够连贯，比如“so I. Ask for my best friend for help”不完整。建议注意句子结构，避免断句错误，并且使用连接词使回答更流畅。

Example: Yes, I have borrowed money from others before, usually from my close friends. For example, last year I needed some extra cash to buy a new cell phone, so I asked my best friend for help.

Suggestion: 回答中存在拼写错误（'land'应为'lent'），句子断断续续，缺少连贯性。建议加强语法和句子连贯性，使用完整句子并加入连接词。

Example: Yes, I have lent money to others before. For example, last month my best friend asked me for some extra money to help with an emergency.

× Usually from my close friends.

✓ Usually, I borrow money from my close friends.

该句缺少主语和谓语，导致句子结构不完整。应补充主语和谓语，使句子完整。

× so I. Ask for my best friend for help.

✓ so I asked my best friend for help.

句中断句错误，且时态应与上下文一致，使用过去时。应将断句合并并调整时态。

× Yes, I have land money to others before.

✓ Yes, I have lent money to others before.

动词“land”拼写错误，正确形式为“lent”，是“lend”的过去分词。

× For example. Last month my best friend asked me some. Extra money for help.

✓ For example, last month my best friend asked me for some extra money for help.

句中断句错误，且缺少介词“for”，应将断句合并并补充介词，使句子通顺完整。