Money— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó giải thích lý do hoặc hoàn cảnh cụ thể. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói rõ bạn mượn tiền để học nâng cao kỹ năng ngôn ngữ và bạn luôn trả lại tiền đúng hạn.

Example: Yes, I sometimes borrow money from my parents when I need to pay for language courses to improve my skills. I always make sure to pay them back as soon as I finish the course.

Suggestion: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời trở nên tự nhiên và dễ hiểu hơn. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, giải thích rõ ràng về việc bạn cho ai mượn tiền, khi nào và tại sao. Sử dụng các liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Yes, I usually lend money to my cousin because she often asks me for help at the end of the month. I send her the money immediately and expect her to pay me back the following month.

× Sometimes I borrow money from my parents when I need money to study an upgrade my language on my knowledge, however.

✓ Sometimes I borrow money from my parents when I need money to study and upgrade my language knowledge, however.

The phrase 'an upgrade' is incorrect here because 'upgrade' is used as a verb, not a noun. The correct form is 'and upgrade' to connect two verbs. Also, 'on my knowledge' is unnecessary and awkward; 'language knowledge' is clearer.

× After that I will repeat them when I finish an.

✓ After that, I will review them when I finish.

The phrase 'repeat them' is incorrect in this context; 'review them' is more appropriate. Also, 'finish an' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'finish' followed by the object or omitted if implied.

× Yes I have a usually Lynn Monday to my cousin because she usually call me and borrow me some money at the end of the month.

✓ Yes, I usually lend money to my cousin because she usually calls me and borrows some money from me at the end of the month.

The sentence has multiple pronoun and verb form errors: 'a usually Lynn Monday' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'usually lend money'. 'She usually call me' should be 'she usually calls me' for subject-verb agreement. 'Borrow me some money' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'borrows some money from me'.

× And immediately I sent her money and at the next month.

✓ And immediately I send her money, and in the next month.

The verb tense 'sent' is past tense, but the context suggests habitual action, so 'send' (present tense) is correct. Also, 'at the next month' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in the next month'.