Money— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤り（"a university students"は誤りで、"a university student"が正しい）や冗長な表現があります。また、内容をより具体的にし、接続詞を使って論理的に話すと良いでしょう。

Example: Yes, I have borrowed money from my sister when I was a university student because I didn't have enough funds to buy textbooks. Therefore, I asked her for financial help to support my studies.

Suggestion: 回答は質問に答えていますが、文法や語彙の誤りが多く、意味が分かりにくい部分があります。例えば、"rent any money"は不自然で、"lend money"が正しい表現です。また、理由の説明が不明瞭なので、より明確で具体的な理由を述べ、接続詞を使って論理的に話すことをおすすめします。

Example: No, I have never lent money to others because my parents advised me that lending money can cause problems if the borrower cannot repay it on time.

× Yes, when I was a university students, I borrowed some money from my sister because at that time I didn't have enough money to buy learning materials for the university.

✓ Yes, when I was a university student, I borrowed some money from my sister because at that time I didn't have enough money to buy learning materials for the university.

The word 'students' is plural, but the subject 'I' is singular, so the noun should be singular 'student' to match the subject. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.

× So I asked her to borrow money.

✓ So I asked her to lend me money.

The verb 'ask' is usually followed by an object and an infinitive verb. Here, 'borrow' is incorrectly used after 'asked her to'. The correct verb is 'lend' because the speaker wants the sister to give money temporarily. Also, 'borrow money' is something the speaker does, not the sister.

× No, I've never lent the money to someone because my parents always told me that I couldn't rent any money or important materials or items to others because it could occur in the program of returning.

✓ No, I've never lent money to anyone because my parents always told me that I shouldn't lend money or important materials or items to others because it could cause problems with returning them.

The phrase 'lent the money to someone' is awkward; 'lent money to anyone' is more natural. Also, 'rent any money' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'lend'. The phrase 'it could occur in the program of returning' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'it could cause problems with returning them'. Pronouns and word choices are incorrect here.