Part 1
Examiner
Have you ever borrowed money from others?
Candidate
No, I haven't borrow money from others because I prefer to manage my finances carefully to avoid boring and I feel uncomfortable owning money to others so I avoid it.
Examiner
Have you ever lent money to others?
Candidate
Yes, I've sent money to others because I am not always say no person. I am not familiar with rejection so when people asked me to lend money I would say OK fine, but I don't think it's a good thing because actually I don't like this feeling.
Have you ever borrowed money from others?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 你的回答中存在语法错误,如“haven't borrow”应为“haven't borrowed”。此外,表达不够自然,且“boring”用词不当,应为“borrowing”。建议注意时态和词汇的准确使用,避免语法错误。
Example: No, I haven't borrowed money from others because I prefer to manage my finances carefully to avoid borrowing. Also, I feel uncomfortable owing money to others, so I try to avoid it.
Have you ever lent money to others?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 回答中存在语法和表达错误,如“sent money”应为“lent money”,“I am not always say no person”表达不清晰。建议使用更准确的表达,注意句子结构和时态,提升语言的自然流畅度。
Example: Yes, I have lent money to others because I find it hard to say no. When people ask me, I usually agree, although I don't like the feeling of lending money.
× No, I haven't borrow money from others because I prefer to manage my finances carefully to avoid boring and I feel uncomfortable owning money to others so I avoid it.
✓ No, I haven't borrowed money from others because I prefer to manage my finances carefully to avoid borrowing and I feel uncomfortable owing money to others so I avoid it.
这里的助动词'haven't'后面应该接动词的过去分词形式,'borrow'应改为'borrowed'。另外,'boring'是形容词,意思是'无聊的',应改为动名词'borrowing'表示'借钱'的动作。'owning money'应改为'owing money',因为'owe'表示'欠钱','own'表示'拥有'。
× Yes, I've sent money to others because I am not always say no person.
✓ Yes, I've lent money to others because I do not always say no to people.
'I've sent'中的'sent'是'send'的过去分词,但这里应该用'lent',因为题目是借钱,'lend'是'借出'的意思。'I am not always say no person'语法错误,应该用一般现在时的否定形式'do not always say no',并且'no person'应改为'no to people'。
× I am not familiar with rejection so when people asked me to lend money I would say OK fine, but I don't think it's a good thing because actually I don't like this feeling.
✓ I am not familiar with rejection, so when people ask me to lend money, I would say OK fine, but I don't think it's a good thing because actually I don't like this feeling.
'when people asked me'应改为一般现在时'when people ask me'以保持时态一致。句中缺少逗号以分隔从句。