MoneyPart 1 Report

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Part 1

Examiner

Have you ever borrowed money from others?

Candidate

Yes, I have borrowed money from others on a few occasions, usually from close friends or family members, for example when I faced unexpected expenses such as urgent medical bills.

Examiner

Have you ever lent money to others?

Candidate

Yes, I have lend money to others. When they have some urgent occasions such as medical bills, I will lend money to them.

Evaluation

Overall

Overall: 6.0Fluency & Coherence: 6.0Pronunciation: 6.0Grammar: 5.5Lexical Resource: 6.0

Part 1

Have you ever borrowed money from others?

Score: 85.0

Suggestion: 你的回答较为自然且内容具体,但句子较长且略显复杂,可以适当简化句子结构,使表达更流畅自然。同时,可以增加一些连接词来增强逻辑性。

Example: Yes, I have borrowed money from close friends or family a few times. For example, I needed help with urgent medical bills. Usually, I only borrow when it's really necessary.

Have you ever lent money to others?

Score: 70.0

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误('have lend'应为'have lent'),且表达较为简单,缺少连接词和细节。建议注意时态和语法的正确使用,并丰富内容,使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Example: Yes, I have lent money to others when they faced urgent situations, such as medical bills. I usually help close friends or family members because I understand their difficulties.

Grammar

Verb in the past participle form

× Yes, I have lend money to others.

Yes, I have lent money to others.

这里使用的是现在完成时态,助动词have后面应该接动词的过去分词形式。'lend'的过去分词是'lent',所以应改为'have lent'。

Modal verb usage

× When they have some urgent occasions such as medical bills, I will lend money to them.

When they have some urgent occasions such as medical bills, I lend money to them.

这里描述的是习惯性动作,应该使用一般现在时而不是将来时。'will lend'表示将来发生的动作,不符合语境。将'modal verb'的'will'去掉,改为一般现在时'lend'更合适。

Vocabulary

CloseNear; Dense; Evenly matched; Immediate; Intimate
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