Money— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by avoiding repetition and using clearer sentence structures. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide more specific details about the situation. For example, instead of repeating 'at the time', you can say 'when I was in the hospital and had no one else to help me, my friend kindly lent me money.'

Example: Yes, I have borrowed money from others before. For instance, when I was hospitalized and had no one else to support me financially, my friend kindly lent me some money. This helped me cover my medical expenses during that difficult period.

Suggestion: Your answer has good content but is affected by filler words and some grammatical errors. To improve, try to avoid fillers like 'uh' and use correct verb forms. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent and provide specific examples to support your points.

Example: Yes, I have lent money to others, especially when they faced emergencies. For example, last year, a close friend needed money urgently for medical treatment, so I lent him some. Helping others in such situations makes me feel satisfied and happy.

× At that time I was in the hospital and there were there were no any others to help me at the time.

✓ At that time I was in the hospital and there was no one else to help me.

The phrase 'there were there were no any others' is incorrect. 'There was' should be used for singular or uncountable subjects, and 'no one else' is the correct expression instead of 'no any others'. The repetition 'there were there were' is also an error. Correcting this improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I have lend money to others, uh, because, uh, they need money in their emergency case.

✓ I have lent money to others, uh, because, uh, they needed money in their emergency case.

The verb 'lend' in present tense is incorrect after 'have'. The past participle 'lent' should be used with the present perfect tense 'have lent'. Also, 'need' should be in past tense 'needed' to match the context of a past event. This correction aligns verb forms with the tense used.

× So I lend money to them.

✓ So I lend money to them.

This sentence is in present tense and matches the context of a habitual action, so no correction is needed here.

× Uh, it makes me feel better to, uh, give money to others when they need in help.

✓ Uh, it makes me feel better to, uh, give money to others when they need help.

The phrase 'need in help' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'need help' without the preposition 'in'. Removing 'in' corrects the prepositional error and improves sentence fluency.