Money— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating ideas and improve sentence structure for better flow. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and provide a more specific reason or example.

Example: No, I have never borrowed money from others because I usually manage my finances carefully. For instance, I budget my expenses monthly to ensure I always have enough money, so borrowing is rarely necessary.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer sentence structures. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas and provide a more detailed explanation or example.

Example: Yes, I have lent money to others, although I usually prefer not to because I value my finances. However, if a close friend needs help, I am willing to lend money because I believe friends should support each other in times of need.

× No, because most of the time I like to manage my money so I won't.

✓ No, because most of the time I like to manage my money so I don't.

The modal verb 'won't' (will not) is used for future intentions or refusals, but here the speaker refers to a habitual action in the present, so 'don't' (do not) is appropriate to express a general negative statement about borrowing money.

× there are limited chance I could borrow money from others.

✓ there are limited chances I could borrow money from others.

The noun 'chance' should be plural 'chances' because it is preceded by 'limited' which implies more than one opportunity. Using the plural form correctly matches the quantifier.

× when my friend want to borrow money I definitely will lend to it.

✓ when my friend wants to borrow money I definitely will lend it to her.

The modal verb phrase 'will lend to it' is incorrect. 'Lend' is a transitive verb and should be followed directly by the object ('it' replaced by 'it to her' for clarity). Also, 'friend' is singular, so the verb should be 'wants' (third person singular).

× when my friend want to borrow money I definitely will lend to it.

✓ when my friend wants to borrow money I definitely will lend it to her.

The subject 'friend' is singular, so the verb should be 'wants' to agree in the third person singular form.

× I definitely will lend to it.

✓ I definitely will lend it to her.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect when referring to a person. The correct pronoun is 'her' to refer to the female friend. Also, the verb 'lend' should be followed by the object and then the indirect object ('lend it to her').

× Lend it to her because a friend lead to help each other when in need, right?

✓ I lend it to her because friends help each other when in need, right?

The original sentence lacks a subject and has incorrect verb forms. 'Lead to help each other' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'friends help each other'. Also, 'a friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the general statement.