App— Part 1 Report

× Actually, I have been using some social media platforms such as Instagram or Facebook to keep in touch with my family and friends are usually screw through T talked to watch some short entertainment videos which can offer me or the LFL escape from my hectic work.

✓ Actually, I have been using some social media platforms such as Instagram or Facebook to keep in touch with my family and friends. I usually scroll through and watch some short entertainment videos which can offer me a little escape from my hectic work.

原句中“are usually screw through T talked to watch”结构混乱，动词形式错误，应使用动名词形式“scroll through”和“watch”表示习惯动作。建议将句子拆分，使用正确的动词形式，使表达清晰。

× Actually I'm really interested in social media applications which kind of help me keep a price of the ladies trends and also it is a convenient way for me to stay in touch with my family, some friends which can help me has the relationships with them.

✓ Actually, I'm really interested in social media applications which kind of help me keep a piece of the latest trends and also it is a convenient way for me to stay in touch with my family and some friends which can help me maintain relationships with them.

原句中“a price of the ladies trends”应为“a piece of the latest trends”，单复数和词汇使用错误；“has the relationships”应为“maintain relationships”，动词形式和搭配错误。需要注意单复数和正确词汇搭配。

× Are usually find out different types through the recommendations of my relatives and on family gatherings we can talk about it and share these applications with each other. I'm really glad to find out such applications through this way becaused they are tested by my.

✓ I usually find out different types through the recommendations of my relatives, and at family gatherings we can talk about them and share these applications with each other. I'm really glad to find out such applications this way because they are tested by my relatives.

原句中“Are usually find out”主语错误，应为“I usually find out”；“on family gatherings”应为“at family gatherings”，介词使用错误；“through this way”应简化为“this way”；“becaused”拼写错误，应为“because”；句尾缺少宾语“relatives”。需要注意主语、介词和拼写的正确使用。

× Actually are in the future I really prefer to use how Sunfishes applications which can help me keep track of my activities an it is also a good reminder for me to take exercise during such busy shadows. I also prefer I've stage can monitor my doubt and sleep patterns.

✓ Actually, in the future I would really prefer to use health and fitness applications which can help me keep track of my activities, and it is also a good reminder for me to exercise during such busy schedules. I also prefer apps that can monitor my diet and sleep patterns.

原句中“are in the future”应为“in the future”；“how Sunfishes applications”词汇错误，应为“health and fitness applications”；“an it is”应为“and it is”；“take exercise”应为“exercise”；“busy shadows”应为“busy schedules”；“I've stage can monitor my doubt”语法和词汇错误，应为“apps that can monitor my diet”。需要注意情态动词的正确使用和词汇拼写。