App— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit unclear and lacks coherence. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons using linking words. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences. For example, explain why Instagram helps you relax and how you use it.

Example: Recently, I have been using Instagram a lot because it helps me relax after a stressful day. For instance, I enjoy watching short videos and pictures that make me feel calm. Moreover, it allows me to connect with friends, which reduces my stress.

Suggestion: Your answer needs better structure and clearer expression. Start with a topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words. Also, correct grammar and avoid incomplete sentences.

Example: I am usually interested in news apps because they keep me updated about my country and the world. This helps me become more knowledgeable. For example, I read news articles daily to learn about current events.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by using clearer sentences and linking words. Explain the process more specifically and avoid vague phrases.

Example: I usually find new apps by searching on Google. For example, if I need an app for learning languages, I search for the best language learning apps and read reviews before downloading.

Suggestion: Your answer is repetitive and unclear. Try to express your ideas clearly with proper sentence structure and linking words. Give specific examples and explain why you want to use such apps.

Example: In the future, I would like to use apps that can control cars remotely. For instance, an app that allows me to start or lock my car using my phone would be very convenient.

× I used many apps but I have given the rating to Instagram 'cause it helps me to stress less and when I'm using the rails and I am doing the relaxation and I always.

✓ I have used many apps but I have given a rating to Instagram because it helps me to stress less when I'm using it for relaxation.

The student mixed past simple and present perfect tenses incorrectly. 'Used' should be 'have used' to indicate recent experience. 'Have given the rating' should be 'have given a rating' for correct article usage. The phrase 'when I'm using the rails and I am doing the relaxation and I always' is unclear and grammatically incorrect; it is corrected to 'when I'm using it for relaxation' to make sense and fit the context.

× I usually like to use the news app because it gave me more knowledge of country and world and it helped me to give more knowledgeable person and.

✓ I usually like to use the news app because it gives me more knowledge about my country and the world, and it helps me become a more knowledgeable person.

The student incorrectly used past tense verbs 'gave' and 'helped' when present tense is appropriate to describe habitual actions. Also, 'knowledge of country and world' is corrected to 'knowledge about my country and the world' for clarity and correctness. The phrase 'helped me to give more knowledgeable person' is incorrect and corrected to 'helps me become a more knowledgeable person'.

× I find out apps from Google because it helps me what kind of app I will use and what kind of help I want to use from apps.

✓ I find apps on Google because it helps me decide what kind of app I will use and what kind of help I want from apps.

The phrase 'find out apps from Google' is incorrect; 'find apps on Google' is the correct prepositional phrase. Also, 'helps me what kind of app I will use' is incomplete and corrected to 'helps me decide what kind of app I will use' for clarity. The phrase 'help I want to use from apps' is awkward and corrected to 'help I want from apps'.

× I like I like to use apps in future like car app. Like we can control a car from app and we can only see of car by a phone.

✓ I would like to use apps in the future, like a car app. For example, we can control a car from an app and see the car through a phone.

The phrase 'I like I like to use apps in future' is repetitive and missing the article 'the' before 'future'. It is corrected to 'I would like to use apps in the future'. 'Like car app' is corrected to 'like a car app' to include the indefinite article. 'We can only see of car by a phone' is grammatically incorrect and corrected to 'see the car through a phone' for clarity and correctness.