App— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答不够连贯，存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议简化句子结构，避免重复和语法错误，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Example: I have recently used a sports app to help me keep fit. It offers many activities that I can do at home, so I don't need to go outside. This helps me exercise my body and stay healthy.

Suggestion: 表达不清晰，语法错误较多，内容重复。建议使用简单句子，明确表达兴趣和原因，避免语法错误。

Example: I am usually interested in social apps because they let me know what is happening daily. I can talk to my friends and share videos that I like with them.

Suggestion: 回答含糊且语法混乱，信息表达不完整。建议理清思路，使用完整句子，清楚说明朋友推荐的应用及原因。

Example: Most of the apps I use are recommended by my friends. For example, a friend who loves sports suggested the Fit app, and another friend interested in fashion recommended Instagram.

Suggestion: 表达不够准确，语法和词汇使用有误。建议明确表达对智能家居应用的看法，使用正确的词汇和句型。

Example: In the future, I would like to use apps that connect my home wirelessly. These apps can control lights, music, and heating, which I think is very convenient.

× Well. I use the. Uhm, sports app to help me keep fit and in the app, there are many of activities that I can do in in my home and I don't need to go out that I can stress my body and improve my in music.

✓ Well, I use the sports app to help me keep fit, and in the app, there are many activities that I can do in my home. I don't need to go out, so I can exercise my body and improve my fitness.

原句中“many of activities”应为“many activities”，且“stress my body”用词不当，应为“exercise my body”。此外，句子结构混乱，需调整使表达更清晰。

× Well, social applications in those apps I can knew what daily going on and I can talk to my friends and apps and share the video that I like to them and I can also see their feet.

✓ Well, social applications. In those apps, I can know what's going on daily, and I can talk to my friends and share the videos that I like with them. I can also see their feeds.

原句中“knew”时态错误，应为“know”；“share the video that I like to them”中“to”用法错误，应为“with”；“see their feet”应为“see their feeds”，词汇错误。

× Well, most of my apps are recommended by my friend like the Fit app, it is recommended by a friend who loves sports and the UM. Instagram likes are horseshoe is recommended from my another friend who likes. Outfit.

✓ Well, most of my apps are recommended by my friends. For example, the Fit app is recommended by a friend who loves sports, and Instagram is recommended by another friend who likes fashion.

原句中“recommended from my another friend”应为“recommended by another friend”，介词错误；“likes are horseshoe”词汇错误，应为“Instagram”；句子结构混乱，需拆分并调整。

× Well I don't like to use app says connected my home with a wireless because I know some act can add on the phone that I can control my homes light, music or the heat. I think it's very convenient.

✓ Well, I would like to use apps that connect my home wirelessly because I know some apps can be added to the phone so that I can control my home's lights, music, or heating. I think it's very convenient.

原句中“don't like to use app says connected”表达不清，应为“would like to use apps that connect”；“some act can add on the phone”应为“some apps can be added to the phone”；“homes light”应为“home's lights”，所有格错误。