App— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Example: Recently, I have used several apps, but the most important ones for me are WhatsApp, Facebook, and YouTube. Among these, YouTube is my favorite because I enjoy watching videos there. It helps me learn new things and relax after a busy day.

Suggestion: Improve your answer by correcting grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly and provide specific reasons.

Example: I am usually interested in both entertainment and educational apps. However, I prefer entertainment apps because I spend a lot of time at home, and these apps help me stay entertained and relaxed.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but can be improved by adding linking words and more specific details to make it more natural and effective.

Example: I usually find out about different apps through advertisements or when a friend recommends an interesting application to me. This way, I can discover useful or fun apps that I might not have known about otherwise.

Suggestion: Work on grammar and sentence flow to make your answer more natural and coherent. Use linking words to connect your ideas and explain your reasons clearly.

Example: In the future, I would like to use more educational apps because I have spent a lot of time on entertainment apps. I believe educational apps will help me improve my knowledge and skills.

× Recently I used a lot of apps but the most important applications for me or WhatsApp and Facebook and YouTube but the most important one.

✓ Recently I used a lot of apps but the most important applications for me are WhatsApp, Facebook, and YouTube, with the most important one being YouTube.

The original sentence has a singular/plural mismatch with 'applications for me or' which should be 'are'. Also, the sentence structure is unclear; adding commas and rephrasing improves clarity and corrects the plural verb agreement.

× Recently I used a lot of apps but the most important applications for me or WhatsApp and Facebook and YouTube but the most important one.

✓ Recently I used a lot of apps but the most important applications for me are WhatsApp, Facebook, and YouTube, with the most important one being YouTube.

The use of 'or' is incorrect here; it should be 'are' to link the subject and predicate properly. Also, 'and' is used to list items correctly.

× Specifically the entertainment apps or educational apps, but I prefer more entertainment becauses I set in the house.

✓ Specifically, entertainment apps or educational apps, but I prefer entertainment more because I stay at home.

The conjunction 'or' is acceptable here but the sentence is awkward. 'Prefer more entertainment' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer entertainment more'. Also, 'becauses' is a misspelling of 'because'. 'Set in the house' is incorrect; 'stay at home' is the correct phrase.

× Specifically the entertainment apps or educational apps, but I prefer more entertainment becauses I set in the house.

✓ Specifically, entertainment apps or educational apps, but I prefer entertainment more because I stay at home.

The phrase 'set in the house' is incorrect; the correct preposition and verb combination is 'stay at home' to express remaining inside the house.

× I find them by advertisement or a friend of mine tells me about an interesting application.

✓ I find them through advertisements or when a friend of mine tells me about an interesting application.

The phrase 'by advertisement' is incorrect; 'through advertisements' is the correct prepositional phrase. Also, 'a friend of mine tells me' is present tense and acceptable here since the sentence is about habitual action.

× In the future I would like to use the more educational apps becauses I spent a lot of time in.

✓ In the future, I would like to use more educational apps because I spend a lot of time on them.

'The more educational apps' is incorrect; 'more educational apps' is correct without 'the'. 'Becauses' is a misspelling of 'because'. 'Spent' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'spend'. Also, 'in' is incorrect preposition; 'on them' is correct.

× In the future I would like to use the more educational apps becauses I spent a lot of time in.

✓ In the future, I would like to use more educational apps because I spend a lot of time on them.

The verb 'spent' is past tense but the sentence refers to a general truth or habit, so present tense 'spend' is appropriate.

× so I'm looking forward to. Doing this.

✓ so I'm looking forward to doing this.

The period after 'to' incorrectly breaks the infinitive phrase. 'Looking forward to' should be followed directly by the gerund 'doing' without a period.