App— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to be more concise and use correct sentence structures. Also, avoid repeating the same idea multiple times. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: I have recently used several apps, including Instagram and Snapchat. These social media platforms help me stay connected with my friends and family. Additionally, they allow me to meet new people and explore different cultures.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical mistakes and some unclear phrases. Try to use correct grammar and avoid awkward expressions. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent and provide specific reasons for your interest.

Example: I am usually interested in social media apps like Instagram and Snapchat because they allow me to keep in touch with my friends and family. Moreover, these platforms provide opportunities to interact with new people and make friends.

Suggestion: Your answer has several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct verb tenses and sentence structures. Also, organise your ideas logically using linking words. Be more specific about how you discover apps.

Example: I usually find out about new apps through advertisements that appear during my YouTube videos. Additionally, my friends often recommend useful apps that help me stay connected and entertained. I also enjoy exploring different types of content on these platforms.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical mistakes and some unclear expressions. Try to use correct grammar and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons for your preferences.

Example: In the future, I would like to continue using social media apps such as Instagram, Snapchat, and WhatsApp because they help me stay updated and entertained. Moreover, I enjoy creating content and keeping up with global trends, which these apps facilitate. They also provide a good way to interact with friends.

× I have recently used many up but some of them are Instagram, Snapchat.

✓ I have recently used many apps but some of them are Instagram, Snapchat.

The word 'up' is incorrect here; the correct plural noun is 'apps'. This is a singular and plural issue where the plural form of 'app' is needed.

× These are all the social media app from which I stay connected with my friends as well as family.

✓ These are all social media apps through which I stay connected with my friends as well as family.

The phrase 'social media app' should be plural 'social media apps' to agree with 'these are all'. Also, 'from which' is better replaced with 'through which' for clarity.

× Moreover, I believe that this is a a good source of connecting with the world tool and here I can get connected with the new friends also.

✓ Moreover, I believe that this is a good tool for connecting with the world, and here I can also get connected with new friends.

The sentence has redundancy ('a a'), awkward phrasing ('source of connecting with the world tool'), and incorrect word order. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical structure.

× I'm mostly interested in those apps that are the social media platforms such as Instagram, Snapchats because there I can stay connected with my friends and family.

✓ I'm mostly interested in those apps that are social media platforms such as Instagram, Snapchat because there I can stay connected with my friends and family.

'Snapchats' should be singular 'Snapchat' as it is a proper noun and the name of an app. Also, 'the social media platforms' should be 'social media platforms' without 'the' for general reference.

× Moreover, I think it is a good way of interacting with the new people are and there I can make friends on that platform 2.

✓ Moreover, I think it is a good way of interacting with new people, and there I can make friends on that platform.

The phrase 'the new people are' is incorrect and redundant. Removing 'are' and 'the' and the extraneous '2' at the end corrects the sentence structure.

× I mostly find out a different app through the advertisement being played in between or of my YouTube videos.

✓ I mostly find out about different apps through advertisements played between my YouTube videos.

The phrase 'find out a different app' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'find out about different apps'. Also, 'in between or of my YouTube videos' is awkward; 'played between my YouTube videos' is correct prepositional usage.

× I'm mostly came to know about the ABS from my friends who keeps suggesting me some good apps which will help me to stay connected with the world and keeps me updated and entertained.

✓ I mostly came to know about the apps from my friends who keep suggesting some good apps that help me stay connected with the world and keep me updated and entertained.

'I'm mostly came' is incorrect; 'I mostly came' is correct past tense. 'Keeps' should be 'keep' to agree with plural 'friends'. Also, 'suggesting me' should be 'suggesting' without 'me' or 'suggesting to me'. 'ABS' corrected to 'apps'.

× Moreover, I love exploring content.

✓ Moreover, I love exploring content.

This sentence is correct; 'love' is followed by the gerund 'exploring' which is appropriate here.

× In the future, I would continue to use social media apps like Instagram, Snapchat, WhatsApp because I think it is a good way to stay updated and do entertain oneself.

✓ In the future, I will continue to use social media apps like Instagram, Snapchat, WhatsApp because I think it is a good way to stay updated and entertain oneself.

'Would continue' is less certain; 'will continue' is better for future plans. 'Do entertain oneself' is incorrect; 'entertain oneself' is correct without 'do'.

× Moreover, I am a person who loves content creating and to be familiar with the trans being followed by the world and moreover, I think it is a good way of interacting with their friends.

✓ Moreover, I am a person who loves content creation and being familiar with the trends followed by the world, and moreover, I think it is a good way of interacting with friends.

'Content creating' should be 'content creation' (noun form). 'To be familiar' should be 'being familiar' to maintain parallel structure. 'Trans' corrected to 'trends'. 'Their friends' changed to 'friends' for clarity.