App— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Ответ студента неясен и содержит много грамматических ошибок. Рекомендуется использовать полные предложения, четко отвечать на вопрос и избегать повторений. Следует улучшить структуру ответа, добавив связующие слова и конкретные детали.

Example: I have recently used Telegram and a translation app. I often use the translation app because it helps me understand foreign languages better.

Suggestion: Ответ не соответствует вопросу и содержит много непонятных фраз. Рекомендуется отвечать прямо на вопрос, использовать связные предложения и конкретизировать интересы, избегая бессвязных выражений.

Example: I am usually interested in social media apps like Telegram because they help me stay connected with my friends and enjoy chatting with people.

Suggestion: Ответ содержит много ошибок и нечетко выражает мысль. Рекомендуется использовать правильную грамматику, структурировать ответ с помощью связующих слов и приводить конкретные примеры.

Example: I usually find new apps by browsing the App Store. I download interesting apps like PUBG and social media apps such as Telegram.

Suggestion: Ответ не ясен и не отвечает на вопрос. Рекомендуется формулировать полный ответ, указывая конкретные типы приложений, которые хотелось бы использовать, и объяснять причины выбора.

Example: In the future, I would like to use more social media apps like Facebook because they help me stay in touch with my friends and family.

× I recently usap these telegram and.

✓ I recently used Telegram and.

The verb 'usap' is incorrect; the correct past tense form is 'used'. Also, 'Telegram' should be capitalized as it is a proper noun. The sentence requires the past tense to match 'recently'. Use 'used' instead of 'usap'.

× I translation.

✓ I use translation apps.

The sentence lacks a verb and proper structure. 'I translation' is incomplete. It should be 'I use translation apps' to express the intended meaning clearly.

× I often use translation.

✓ I often use translation apps.

The word 'translation' alone is a noun and needs a qualifier. Adding 'apps' clarifies the meaning and completes the sentence structure.

× This help you translate.

✓ This helps you translate.

Subject-verb agreement error: 'This' is singular, so the verb should be 'helps' (third person singular).

× Are you really interested at these telegram from reset?

✓ Are you really interested in Telegram from Reset?

The correct preposition after 'interested' is 'in', not 'at'. Also, 'Telegram' should be capitalized as a proper noun.

× Any friend's and?

✓ Any friends?

The phrase is incomplete and unclear. 'Any friends?' is a proper question fragment. The original is fragmented and lacks clarity.

× With people enjoying and.

✓ I enjoy interacting with people.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. A complete sentence expressing enjoyment with people is needed.

× County and canals.

✓ I like exploring counties and canals.

The phrase is incomplete and lacks a verb. Adding a verb and clarifying the meaning improves the sentence.

× This is enjoy.

✓ This is enjoyable.

Incorrect adjective form. 'Enjoy' is a verb; the adjective form 'enjoyable' should be used here.

× I found out and different demps in App Store.

✓ I found different apps in the App Store.

'Found out' is incorrect here; 'found' is sufficient. 'Demps' is a misspelling of 'apps'. Also, 'the' is needed before 'App Store'.

× I download an App Store, any apps, many apps.

✓ I download many apps from the App Store.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. Correct structure includes the preposition 'from' and proper quantifier 'many apps'.

× And we jam.

✓ We enjoy them.

The phrase 'And we jam' is unclear and informal. 'We enjoy them' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Interesting such as Pub G and social media telegram.

✓ Interesting apps include PUBG and social media apps like Telegram.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb. Also, 'Pub G' should be 'PUBG', and 'Telegram' should be capitalized.

× I like using it.

✓ I like using it.

This sentence is grammatically correct and needs no correction.

× Online.

✓ I like using online apps.

'Online' alone is not a complete sentence. It needs to be part of a complete sentence.

× Where is Bobby?

✓ Where is Bobby?

This sentence is grammatically correct but seems unrelated to the question about apps.

× Facebook.

✓ I like using Facebook.

'Facebook' alone is not a complete sentence. It should be part of a complete sentence expressing preference.