AppPart 1 Report

MockPart12025-06-09 14:04:50

Conversation

Part 1

Examiner

What apps have you recently used?

Candidate

I'm practicing English everyday and I have apps for reading, listening, writing and speaking and I really enjoy Liz apps because I can practice in English anytime and anywhere. Is a very convenient to thanks for the technology.

Examiner

What kinds of apps are you usually interested in?

Candidate

I'm interested in the app slot improve English is ability and I'm practicing English everyday and some of the apps is really intuitive and easy to use and I can make a progress every day will.

Examiner

How do you find out different apps?

Candidate

Eyebrows frown l'internet and I read online articles from the experts, and sometimes I ask my English teachers to find out the English practical apps to improve my language skills, and I especially like to try the speaking English.

Examiner

What kinds of apps would you like to use in the future?

Candidate

I would like to use the app Slide Provider interactive exercises such as correcting my writing center, Correcting my speaking pronunciation and my Vocabulary which can help improve my language skills and keep me motive.

Evaluation

Overall

Overall: 5.0Fluency & Coherence: 5.5Pronunciation: 5.0Grammar: 5.0Lexical Resource: 5.0

Part 1

What apps have you recently used?

Score: 60.0

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,例如“Is a very convenient to thanks for the technology”不符合英语表达习惯。建议注意句子结构,避免语法错误,并使用更自然的表达方式。

Example: I have recently used several English learning apps for reading, listening, writing, and speaking. I especially enjoy using Liz's app because it allows me to practice English anytime and anywhere, which is very convenient thanks to modern technology.

What kinds of apps are you usually interested in?

Score: 50.0

Suggestion: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不清晰,且句子结构混乱。建议简化句子,明确表达兴趣的应用类型,并注意主谓一致和时态使用。

Example: I am usually interested in apps that help improve my English skills. I practice every day using apps that are intuitive and easy to use, which helps me make progress consistently.

How do you find out different apps?

Score: 45.0

Suggestion: 回答中出现了无意义词汇“Eyebrows frown l'internet”,影响理解。建议去除无关内容,使用清晰的句子表达如何寻找应用,并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Example: I usually find different apps by searching the internet and reading online articles written by experts. Sometimes, I also ask my English teachers for recommendations, especially for apps that help improve speaking skills.

What kinds of apps would you like to use in the future?

Score: 55.0

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,如“Slide Provider interactive exercises”表达不清。建议明确表达想使用的应用类型,并注意句子结构和词汇使用。

Example: In the future, I would like to use apps that provide interactive exercises, such as those that help correct my writing, improve my pronunciation, and expand my vocabulary. These apps can help me improve my language skills and keep me motivated.

Grammar

Incorrect use of the definite article

× Is a very convenient to thanks for the technology.

It is very convenient thanks to the technology.

句子缺少主语,应使用“It is”来表达“这是”。此外,“thanks for”应改为“thanks to”,表示“多亏了”。

Singular and plural issue

× I'm interested in the app slot improve English is ability and I'm practicing English everyday and some of the apps is really intuitive and easy to use and I can make a progress every day will.

I'm interested in apps that improve English ability and I'm practicing English every day. Some of the apps are really intuitive and easy to use and I can make progress every day.

“app slot”应为复数“apps”,“is ability”应为“improve English ability”。“some of the apps is”中的“is”应改为复数“are”。“a progress”中“progress”是不可数名词,不需要冠词。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Eyebrows frown l'internet and I read online articles from the experts, and sometimes I ask my English teachers to find out the English practical apps to improve my language skills, and I especially like to try the speaking English.

I browse the internet and read online articles from experts, and sometimes I ask my English teachers to find practical English apps to improve my language skills. I especially like to try speaking English.

“Eyebrows frown l'internet”是错误表达,应为“I browse the internet”。“from the experts”中“the”不必要,改为“from experts”。“find out the English practical apps”应为“find practical English apps”。“try the speaking English”应为“try speaking English”。

Incorrect use of the definite article

× I would like to use the app Slide Provider interactive exercises such as correcting my writing center, Correcting my speaking pronunciation and my Vocabulary which can help improve my language skills and keep me motive.

I would like to use an app that provides interactive exercises such as correcting my writing, correcting my speaking pronunciation, and my vocabulary, which can help improve my language skills and keep me motivated.

“the app Slide Provider”表达不清,应改为“an app that provides”。“writing center”应为“writing”。“Vocabulary”不需要大写。最后“keep me motive”应为“keep me motivated”。

Vocabulary

EasyUncomplicated; Docile; Vulnerable; Leisurely
InterestedAttentive; Concerned; Partisan
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