App— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Javobingizni yanada aniqroq va tabiiyroq qilish uchun, gaplaringizni qisqartiring va grammatikani yaxshilang. Masalan, 'I use the IELTS Speaking Practice app and Instagram. I use Instagram when I have free time, and the IELTS app to prepare for my speaking test.' kabi gapiring.

Example: I have recently used the IELTS Speaking Practice app and Instagram. I usually browse Instagram during my free time, and I use the IELTS app to prepare for my speaking test.

Suggestion: Javobingizni aniqroq va mantiqiyroq qilish uchun, gaplaringizni qisqartiring va bog'lovchi so'zlardan foydalaning. Masalan, 'I am interested in messaging apps like Telegram because I use it to chat with friends and relatives. Also, I use Instagram when I am bored.' kabi gapiring.

Example: I am usually interested in messaging apps like Telegram because I use it to communicate with my friends and relatives. Additionally, I use Instagram when I feel bored.

Suggestion: Javobingizni yanada aniq va grammatik jihatdan to'g'ri qilish uchun, gaplaringizni qisqartiring va mantiqiy bog'lovchi so'zlardan foydalaning. Masalan, 'I find new apps in the App Store. Sometimes, while playing games, I see ads for other apps, and if I like them, I download and try them.' kabi gapiring.

Example: I usually find new apps in the App Store. Sometimes, while playing games, I see ads for other apps, and if I find them interesting, I download and try them.

Suggestion: Javobingizni yanada aniq va grammatik jihatdan to'g'ri qilish uchun, gaplaringizni qisqartiring va mantiqiy bog'lovchi so'zlardan foydalaning. Masalan, 'In the future, I would like to use PUBG Mobile or Counter-Strike because I have never played them, and I want to play with my friends who enjoy these games.' kabi gapiring.

Example: In the future, I would like to play PUBG Mobile or Counter-Strike because I have never tried them. My friends play these games on their phones, and I want to join them.

× I use IELTS speaking practice app and Instagram or like this because when I have a pre time I watch it Instagram and when I want to do my homework or I want to prepare for my aisles speaking I use I'll speaking practice app.

✓ I use the IELTS speaking practice app and Instagram or similar apps because when I have free time I watch Instagram, and when I want to do my homework or prepare for my IELTS speaking, I use the IELTS speaking practice app.

The sentence has issues with verb tense consistency and article usage. 'Pre time' should be 'free time'. 'Watch it Instagram' is incorrect; it should be 'watch Instagram'. 'Aisles speaking' is a misspelling of 'IELTS speaking'. Also, 'I'll speaking practice app' should be 'IELTS speaking practice app'. Articles 'the' are needed before app names. Suggestions: Use correct verb forms and articles, and correct spelling for clarity.

× My favorite and interested perhaps inside and Telegram because when I want to write a message to my friends or like this or my relatives are using Telegram and when I want when I'm bored and I want to use the swords like this, I use Instagram.

✓ My favorite and interesting apps are Instagram and Telegram because when I want to write a message to my friends or relatives who use Telegram, I use it. Also, when I'm bored and want to use social media, I use Instagram.

The original sentence misuses prepositions and has unclear phrasing. 'Interested perhaps inside and Telegram' is incorrect; it should be 'interesting apps are Instagram and Telegram'. 'Like this' is vague and unnecessary. 'Use the swords like this' is unclear and likely a mishearing or mistranslation; replaced with 'use social media'. Suggestions: Use clear prepositions and precise vocabulary to express ideas clearly.

× I can found out different apps from my App Store or when I am bored and I play games and they have ads like this and they have ads I show it and when I like it this games or apps I download it from my App Store and I play also.

✓ I can find different apps from my App Store, or when I am bored and play games that have ads. When I see an ad I like, I download the game or app from my App Store and play it.

'Can found out' is incorrect; 'can find' is correct because 'can' is followed by the base form of the verb. 'I show it' is unclear and likely means 'I see it'. 'I like it this games' is incorrect; it should be 'I like these games'. Suggestions: Use correct verb forms after modal verbs and clarify pronouns and references.

× I want to use in the future pub G mobile or counter strike because I have never used it and I want to use it because I want to play with my friends. They play with their phones and I have found two but I cannot play it and I.

✓ In the future, I want to use PUBG Mobile or Counter-Strike because I have never used them and I want to play with my friends. They play on their phones, and I have found these games but cannot play them yet.

The sentence has issues with article usage and plural forms. 'Pub G mobile' should be 'PUBG Mobile'. 'Counter strike' should be 'Counter-Strike'. 'I have found two' is unclear; it should be 'these games'. 'Cannot play it and I' is incomplete and unclear; corrected to 'cannot play them yet'. Suggestions: Use correct game names, plural pronouns for multiple games, and complete sentences for clarity.