App— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly stating the app you use and why you find it useful. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity.

Example: Recently, I've been using Instagram the most because it provides interesting news and inspiring content that helps me relax and recharge my energy.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and contains repetition. Use correct grammar and be more specific about the types of apps you like. Also, avoid repeating phrases unnecessarily.

Example: I am usually interested in sports apps that provide real-time updates on different matches.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and has many grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your thoughts clearly, use proper sentence structure, and explain how you discover apps in a logical way.

Example: Since there are so many apps in the App Store, I often feel confused about which ones to download. Therefore, I usually ask friends or read reviews to get recommendations before choosing an app.

Suggestion: Your answer has unclear phrases and grammatical errors. Try to clearly state your future app preferences and explain why you want to use them, using proper linking words and sentence structure.

Example: Since I am currently learning Spanish and studying business, in the future I would like to use more apps for learning Spanish and business-related apps because they are important for my studies.

× Recently I've used several apps, so I want to stay take the most the most useful one there I've been used most.

✓ Recently I've used several apps, so I want to stay and take the most useful one that I've used the most.

The phrase 'I've been used most' incorrectly uses the past participle 'been used' instead of the present perfect 'I've used'. Also, 'stay take' is incorrect; it should be 'stay and take' to connect the actions properly.

× It is Instagram which have a lot of fancy news and there's a lot of very interesting thing which can help me to recharge myself and give me energy.

✓ It is Instagram which has a lot of fancy news and there are a lot of very interesting things which can help me recharge myself and give me energy.

The subject 'Instagram' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' not 'have'. Also, 'there's' (there is) should be 'there are' because it refers to plural 'things'. 'Thing' should be plural 'things' to match 'a lot of'. The phrase 'help me to recharge' is better as 'help me recharge' for natural English.

× And I usually interested in some sparse apps which can provide me the real time the real time information of different matches.

✓ And I am usually interested in some sparse apps which can provide me with real-time information about different matches.

The sentence is missing the verb 'am' to form the present continuous 'I am usually interested'. Also, 'provide me the real time the real time information' is redundant and missing the preposition 'with'. 'Real time' should be hyphenated as 'real-time'. 'Of different matches' is better as 'about different matches'.

× I don't know because there is numerous apps in the App Store is we should like confuse mean and sometimes I don't know which one to download.

✓ I don't know because there are numerous apps in the App Store, which can be confusing, and sometimes I don't know which one to download.

'There is numerous apps' is incorrect; 'apps' is plural so it should be 'there are'. The phrase 'is we should like confuse mean' is ungrammatical and unclear; it is corrected to 'which can be confusing' to convey the intended meaning. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× So I find some advice, I consult some people who can give me some other guys.

✓ So I seek some advice; I consult some people who can give me suggestions.

'I find some advice' is awkward; 'seek some advice' is more natural. 'Some other guys' is unclear and incorrect as an object; it is replaced with 'suggestions' to clarify meaning.

× So if they can give me some advice of some apps, some information needed to download the apps.

✓ So if they can give me some advice about some apps and information needed to download the apps.

The phrase 'advice of some apps' is incorrect; it should be 'advice about some apps'. The sentence is incomplete and lacks conjunctions; adding 'and' improves clarity.

× Because now I am learning Spanish an I'm learning business also.

✓ Because now I am learning Spanish and I'm also learning business.

The conjunction 'an' is a typo and should be 'and'. The adverb 'also' is better placed before the verb 'learning' for natural English: 'I'm also learning'.

× So in the future I would like to say I'll use more ABS light learning Spanish an when you turn, when it comes to the business, the business apps is also vital for me.

✓ So in the future, I would like to say I'll use more apps for learning Spanish, and when it comes to business, business apps are also vital for me.

'ABS light learning Spanish' is a typo and should be 'apps for learning Spanish'. 'When you turn' is incorrect and replaced with 'when it comes to'. 'The business apps is' has subject-verb agreement error; 'apps' is plural so the verb should be 'are'.