App— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: In your answer, try to use correct grammar and avoid redundancy. For example, say 'I have recently used several apps, but my favorite is a language learning app called Lingo.' Also, provide clear and specific details about how the app helps you, and use linking words like 'for example' or 'also' to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: I have recently used several apps, but my favorite is a language learning app called Lingo. It helps me improve my vocabulary and grammar through exercises and games. Also, I use Facebook to stay connected with my friends and share updates.

Suggestion: Make sure to use correct sentence structure and grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to explain your reasons. Be specific about the app's features and how they help you.

Example: I am usually interested in language learning apps because they help me improve my vocabulary and grammar. For example, the Lingo app offers various exercises and games that make learning fun and effective.

Suggestion: Try to express your ideas more clearly and complete your sentences. Use linking words like 'for example' to introduce examples. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and improve grammar for better clarity.

Example: I find out about different apps through recommendations from my friends and family. For example, they suggested Duolingo, which is a language learning app that helps improve my skills effectively.

Suggestion: Focus on clear and complete sentences. Use correct verb tenses and avoid redundancy. Provide specific reasons and examples, and use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to connect your ideas logically.

Example: In the future, I would like to use Facebook because it helps me relax and reduce stress. For example, after my classes, I usually scroll through Facebook to watch funny videos and stories.

× I have recently used several app but the one is my favorite is a language learning app called Lingo.

✓ I have recently used several apps but the one that is my favorite is a language learning app called Lingo.

The word 'app' should be plural 'apps' because 'several' refers to more than one. In English, countable nouns must agree in number with their quantifiers.

× It have made to improve my language learning skills such as what capsule, Arianne grammar in so many different ways such as exercise and play games.

✓ It has helped me improve my language learning skills such as vocabulary and grammar in many different ways such as exercises and playing games.

The verb 'have' should be 'has' to agree with the singular subject 'It'. Also, the sentence needed restructuring for clarity and correct verb forms.

× Additionally, I often use social media app like Facebook to stay connected with friends and spend time on social.

✓ Additionally, I often use social media apps like Facebook to stay connected with friends and spend time on social media.

'App' should be plural 'apps' because 'social media' refers to multiple platforms. Also, 'social' is incomplete and should be 'social media'.

× There are so many kind of app that I usually interested in, but one I like the most.

✓ There are so many kinds of apps that I am usually interested in, but one I like the most.

'Kind' should be plural 'kinds' and 'app' should be plural 'apps' to agree with 'so many'. Also, 'interested' needs the verb 'am' before it.

× There are so many kind of app that I usually interested in, but one I like the most.

✓ There are so many kinds of apps that I am usually interested in, but one I like the most.

The phrase 'I usually interested in' is incorrect; it should be 'I am usually interested in' to use the correct present tense form.

× This app would allow me to improve my language learning skills such as vocabulary and grammar.

✓ This app allows me to improve my language learning skills such as vocabulary and grammar.

Since the question is about usual interests, present simple tense 'allows' is more appropriate than 'would allow'.

× So it have many different way to enhance my ability.

✓ So it has many different ways to enhance my ability.

'Have' should be 'has' for third person singular 'it', and 'way' should be plural 'ways' to agree with 'many'.

× I find out different apps through the recommendation of my friends or family.

✓ I find different apps through the recommendations of my friends or family.

The phrase 'find out' is less appropriate here; 'find' is better. Also, 'recommendation' should be plural 'recommendations' to match 'friends or family'.

× I think they try to discover the app that very effective for them that they are in it.

✓ I think they try to discover apps that are very effective for them that they use.

The sentence needed correction for verb forms and clarity: 'app' to 'apps', 'that very effective' to 'that are very effective', and 'they are in it' to 'they use'.

× For example, they find the app like Duolingo.

✓ For example, they find apps like Duolingo.

'App' should be plural 'apps' to match the context of multiple recommendations.

× This one is a language learning app that can improve my skills such as.

✓ This one is a language learning app that can improve my skills such as vocabulary and grammar.

The sentence is incomplete; it needs to specify the skills to be improved for clarity.

× That's an interesting question. I would say Facebook is the app that I would like to use end of future because it allowed me to release my stress and fear relax after spending times on it.

✓ That's an interesting question. I would say Facebook is the app that I would like to use in the future because it allows me to relieve my stress and relax after spending time on it.

'End of future' is incorrect; 'in the future' is correct. 'Allowed' should be 'allows' to match present tense for habitual action. 'Release my stress and fear relax' is incorrect; 'relieve my stress and relax' is correct. 'Spending times' should be 'spending time'.

× For example I after my class are usually scrolling on the Facebook to watch the window plus size store joke story an it's.

✓ For example, after my class, I usually scroll on Facebook to watch funny stories and jokes.

The sentence had incorrect word order and unnecessary words. 'Are usually scrolling' should be 'usually scroll' for present simple tense. 'The Facebook' should be 'Facebook'. The rest was unclear and corrected for clarity.