App— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to form complete sentences and directly answer the question by naming the apps and briefly explaining their use. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: Recently, I have used several apps such as a food delivery app to order meals, a timer app to manage my tasks, and Google Maps to navigate around the city.

Suggestion: Your response is confusing and does not directly answer the question. Focus on stating the types of apps you like and explain why, using complete sentences and relevant vocabulary.

Example: I am usually interested in apps that help with daily life, such as navigation apps that provide information about locations and help me find places easily.

Suggestion: Your answer has some good points but is repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words to improve coherence.

Example: I usually find new apps through the App Store by reading reviews and checking their popularity and ratings to decide if they are useful for me.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Provide a direct response about the types of apps you want to use in the future, explaining why, and use complete sentences with appropriate vocabulary.

Example: In the future, I would like to use educational apps that can help me improve my skills and learn new things more effectively.

× Using an order. Timer. But I'm listening. I'm using Google Maps.

✓ I am using an order timer, but I am also listening and using Google Maps.

The original sentence fragments lack proper sentence structure and connection. Combining the fragments into a complete sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I love you. Daily life so. Give me information about location.

✓ I love apps related to daily life that give me information about locations.

The phrase 'I love you' is incorrect in this context; it should refer to 'apps'. Also, the sentence fragments need to be combined properly, and 'location' should be pluralized to 'locations' to match the context.

× I'm usually a new app through the App Store and I'm reading the review how how is that is popular and and what is the rating this is that they are used for as well.

✓ I usually find new apps through the App Store and read reviews about how popular they are, their ratings, and what they are used for.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains repeated words and unclear phrasing. Rewriting it into a clear, complete sentence improves understanding and grammatical correctness.

× Hey I I would like to use it. Educational level. Help help help.

✓ I would like to use educational apps that help me improve my level.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Combining the ideas into a complete sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects the grammar.