App— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần sử dụng ngữ pháp chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi số nhiều không phù hợp (ví dụ: "friends" thay vì "friend", "family" thay vì "families"). Ngoài ra, bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và mở rộng thêm chi tiết cụ thể về cách bạn sử dụng các ứng dụng này.

Example: I usually use social media apps such as Yellow, Facebook, and Instagram to keep in touch with my friends and stay connected with my family. For example, I often share funny stories or interesting photos with them, which helps us maintain close relationships despite the distance.

Suggestion: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì đúng (ví dụ: "they help" thay vì "it's helped") và danh từ số nhiều phù hợp (skills thay vì skill). Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời rõ ràng và thêm ví dụ cụ thể về cách các ứng dụng từ điển giúp bạn cải thiện kỹ năng tiếng Anh.

Example: I am usually interested in dictionary apps because they help me improve my English skills, such as pronunciation, communication, and grammar. For instance, I use these apps to listen to correct pronunciations and practice speaking more confidently.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sử dụng đại từ và danh từ phù hợp (ví dụ: "these apps" thay vì "this app") và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể về cách bạn tìm kiếm hoặc lựa chọn ứng dụng.

Example: I often discover new apps by myself through browsing app stores or reading reviews. However, sometimes my friends introduce me to interesting and practical apps that help me with my studies and assessments.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể về cách bạn sẽ sử dụng các ứng dụng trong tương lai.

Example: In the future, I would like to use more social media apps to support my research and studies. Additionally, these apps will help me build new relationships and make new friends from different backgrounds.

× I usually use some kind of social media apps such as yellow, Facebook, Instagram to keep in touch with my friend and stay connected with my families.

✓ I usually use some kinds of social media apps such as Yellow, Facebook, and Instagram to keep in touch with my friends and stay connected with my family.

The word 'kind' should be plural 'kinds' when referring to multiple types. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends' because it refers to more than one person. 'Families' should be singular 'family' when referring to one's relatives collectively.

× Sometime I can share some funny story with them.

✓ Sometimes I can share some funny stories with them.

The adverb 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Story' should be plural 'stories' because it refers to multiple instances.

× I am interested in some dictionary apps because it's helped me improve my English skill such as pronunciations, communications and grammar.

✓ I am interested in some dictionary apps because they have helped me improve my English skills such as pronunciation, communication, and grammar.

The contraction 'it's' (it has) is incorrect here; 'they have' is correct because 'apps' is plural. 'Skill' should be plural 'skills' to refer to multiple areas. Also, 'pronunciations' and 'communications' should be singular 'pronunciation' and 'communication' as they refer to general concepts.

× I often find out this app by myself.

✓ I often find this app by myself.

'Find out' is used for discovering information, but here 'find' is appropriate for discovering the app. 'By myself' is correct to indicate doing it alone.

× However, sometimes my friends introduce me some interesting and practical apps for my study and help me do my assessment.

✓ However, sometimes my friends introduce me to some interesting and practical apps for my studies and help me do my assessments.

The verb 'introduce' requires the preposition 'to' when indicating the person being introduced to something. 'Study' should be plural 'studies' to indicate various academic activities. 'Assessment' should be plural 'assessments' if referring to multiple tasks.

× In the future, I will tend to use more social media apps for my study research, and I can make new relationships with other people or make new friends.

✓ In the future, I will tend to use more social media apps for my study research, and I will be able to make new relationships with other people or make new friends.

The modal verb 'can' is replaced with 'will be able to' to correctly express future ability. This aligns with the future tense context indicated by 'In the future' and 'will tend'.