App— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误，如“We can chatting”应为“We can chat”，且句子结构不够自然。建议注意动词形式和句子连贯性，避免重复表达。

Example: I use WeChat the most because it is a super app. We can chat, share photos, make video calls with family or friends, and even pay bills or book a taxi.

Suggestion: 回答开头缺少主语，且表达不够完整。建议完整表达主语和谓语，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Example: I am usually interested in apps where I can watch videos, such as TikTok. On TikTok, I can see people dancing or selling things, which I find very entertaining.

Suggestion: 回答中有重复和语法错误，如“I will I will I will”和“one of my friend recommend me”。建议简化句子，注意主谓一致和时态。

Example: Actually, I often discover new apps from my friends. They recommend good apps, so I try them. For example, a friend recommended TikTok to me, and I found it interesting.

Suggestion: 回答表达较好，但句子中“because”重复使用，建议使用连接词替换以增强句子流畅性。

Example: I would like to use AI apps like ChatGPT or DeepSeek in the future, as I find it interesting to talk with AI agents, almost like having a friend to chat with.

× We can chatting, sharing photos, make video calls with family or friends and also we can pay something or even book a taxi.

✓ We can chat, share photos, make video calls with family or friends, and also we can pay for something or even book a taxi.

动词后面接动名词形式（-ing）错误。情态动词can后应接动词原形，不能用动名词。应将chatting改为chat，sharing改为share。

× and also we can pay something or even book a taxi.

✓ and also we can pay for something or even book a taxi.

动词pay后通常需要介词for来表示支付某物。缺少介词导致表达不完整。

× Are usually interested in some apps which I can find videos like TikTok.

✓ I am usually interested in some apps where I can find videos like TikTok.

句子缺少主语，且关系代词使用不当。应补充主语I，并用where引导定语从句修饰apps。

× I can see people dancing or selling things in TikTok and it's very funny.

✓ I can see people dancing or selling things on TikTok and it's very funny.

表示在某个平台上时，通常用介词on而不是in。

× Actually I always find some new app from my friends they use and they say are good and I will I will I will try it like TikTok is one of my friend recommend me to to download this app and it's interesting.

✓ Actually, I always find some new apps from my friends. They use them and say they are good, and I will try them. For example, TikTok is one app one of my friends recommended me to download, and it's interesting.

原句结构混乱，缺少标点，主谓不一致，重复词语。需要拆分句子，调整主谓一致，去除重复，使用正确的时态和表达。

× TikTok is one of my friend recommend me to to download this app and it's interesting.

✓ TikTok is one of my friends who recommended me to download this app, and it's interesting.

one of后面应接复数名词friends，且关系从句缺少关系代词who。

× I would like to use some apps with some AI like ChatGPT or DeepSeek because I think it's quite interesting because you can talk with AI agents, like have a friend talking with you.

✓ I would like to use some apps with AI like ChatGPT or DeepSeek because I think they're quite interesting; you can talk with AI agents, like having a friend talk with you.

表达中“like have a friend talking with you”结构不正确，应使用动名词having和动词原形talk，保持表达连贯。