App— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が目立ちます。例えば、「the Instagram」や「film apps」は不適切で、「enabled me to socialize」の前に「has」が必要です。また、最後の文は意味が不明瞭で冗長です。より自然で明確な表現を心がけ、文法ミスを減らしましょう。

Example: I have recently used Instagram, which is an essential app on my smartphone. It helps me stay connected with many people at my university. Without it, I would find it difficult to maintain my social life.

Suggestion: 回答は簡潔で直接的ですが、もう少し具体的な説明や理由を加えると良いでしょう。また、「first person shooting games」は「first-person shooter games」が正しい表現です。接続詞を使って文をつなげると、より自然な流れになります。

Example: I am usually interested in video games, especially first-person shooter games, because they are exciting and help me relax after studying.

Suggestion: 文法的な誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。「recommend me」ではなく「recommend to me」が正しいですし、「UPS」や「video or X」の意味が不明瞭です。具体的なアプリ名や方法を明確にし、文法を正しく使いましょう。

Example: I usually find out about different apps through my friends, who often recommend useful apps like YouTube or Twitter, which I find easy to use.

Suggestion: 回答は意味が通じますが、文法の誤りがあります。「apps that is useful」ではなく「apps that are useful」が正しいです。また、「beneficial apps」だけでなく、具体的にどのようなアプリか説明すると良いでしょう。

Example: Currently, I play too many video games, so in the future, I would like to use educational apps that can help improve my study skills.

× I think the Instagram is the most essential film apps in my smartphone because it's enabled me to socialize with many people in the university.

✓ I think Instagram is the most essential film app on my smartphone because it has enabled me to socialize with many people at the university.

'The' is not used before Instagram because it is a proper noun. 'Apps' should be singular 'app' to match 'most essential'. 'On' is the correct preposition for devices. 'Has enabled' is the correct present perfect tense. 'At the university' is the correct preposition for location.

× So without it we can I cannot spend normal life.

✓ So without it, I cannot live a normal life.

The sentence has incorrect modal verb usage and word order. 'Can I cannot' is incorrect; it should be 'I cannot'. Also, 'spend normal life' is unnatural; 'live a normal life' is correct.

× My friends always recommend me some UPS like the video or X that's very comfortable for me to use it.

✓ My friends always recommend some apps like YouTube or X that are very comfortable for me to use.

The preposition 'recommend me' is incorrect; it should be 'recommend some apps to me' or simply 'recommend some apps'. 'UPS' is likely a typo for 'apps'. 'The video or X' is unclear; 'YouTube or X' is assumed. 'That's' should be 'that are' to agree with plural 'apps'. The pronoun 'it' is unnecessary.

× I think the Instagram is the most essential film apps in my smartphone because it's enabled me to socialize with many people in the university.

✓ I think Instagram is the most essential film app on my smartphone because it has enabled me to socialize with many people at the university.

The phrase 'film apps' is plural but should be singular 'film app' to agree with 'most essential'.

× I think the Instagram is the most essential film apps in my smartphone because it's enabled me to socialize with many people in the university.

✓ I think Instagram is the most essential film app on my smartphone because it has enabled me to socialize with many people at the university.

The preposition 'in my smartphone' should be 'on my smartphone' because apps are on devices. Also, 'in the university' should be 'at the university' to indicate location.

× For now, I use too many video games, so I want to use some beneficial apps that is useful for my study.

✓ For now, I use too many video games, so I want to use some beneficial apps that are useful for my studies.

The verb 'is' should be 'are' to agree with plural 'apps'. 'Study' should be plural 'studies' to refer to academic work.