App— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding repetition and grammatical errors. Use a topic sentence directly answering the question and add a supporting detail with linking words. For example, mention one or two apps and briefly explain why you use them.

Example: I have recently used several apps, including Facebook, which is a very popular social media platform worldwide. I use it to keep in touch with my friends and stay updated with news.

Suggestion: Improve sentence structure and coherence by using linking words and complete sentences. Be specific about the types of apps and explain why you like them. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and correct grammar mistakes.

Example: I am usually interested in apps that provide real videos and news, such as international, political, national, and sports news. I often use these apps during my free time to stay informed and entertained.

Suggestion: Focus on clarity and grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas and explain how you discover new apps and what you do with them. Avoid repetition and incorrect word usage.

Example: I usually find new apps like Instagram, which is similar to Facebook. I use it to share my feelings, photos, and videos, and I also learn many educational things through it.

Suggestion: Make your answer more structured and clear by using proper tenses and avoiding repetition. Give a direct answer about the types of apps you want to use in the future and explain why.

Example: In the future, I would like to use apps that help me learn new skills and improve my knowledge. I believe such apps will be useful for my personal and professional growth.

× I recently used many apps, one of them Facebook and this is it is a famous platform in in the world.

✓ I recently used many apps; one of them is Facebook, and it is a famous platform in the world.

The sentence had missing verb 'is' after 'one of them' and repeated 'is' unnecessarily. Also, 'in in' is a repetition error. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I recently used many apps, one of them Facebook and this is it is a famous platform in in the world.

✓ I recently used many apps; one of them is Facebook, and it is a famous platform in the world.

The phrase 'in in the world' contains a repeated preposition 'in'. Removing the duplicate corrects the prepositional phrase.

× Many kinds of apps I usually interested in uh real videos, international news, politics news and national news, Sports News. Also when I free time I scrolling and use this app.

✓ I am usually interested in many kinds of apps such as real videos, international news, political news, national news, and sports news. Also, when I have free time, I scroll and use these apps.

The original sentence lacks proper subject-verb agreement and correct sentence structure. Adding 'I am' and correcting verb forms improves clarity. Also, 'politics news' should be 'political news' and 'Sports News' should be lowercase unless a proper noun.

× Many kinds of apps I usually interested in uh real videos, international news, politics news and national news, Sports News. Also when I free time I scrolling and use this app.

✓ I am usually interested in many kinds of apps such as real videos, international news, political news, national news, and sports news. Also, when I have free time, I scroll and use these apps.

The verb 'interested' requires the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present tense. 'I scrolling' should be 'I scroll' to match the present tense and subject.

× Also when I free time I scrolling and use this app.

✓ Also, when I have free time, I scroll and use this app.

The phrase 'when I free time' is missing the verb 'have' to correctly express possession of free time.

× I found I found out different depths is Instagram, it is same similar apps of Facebook and when I share my feelings, photos, videos and I learn too many. I learned many things educational purpose also things.

✓ I found out about different apps like Instagram; it is a similar app to Facebook. When I share my feelings, photos, and videos, I also learn many things for educational purposes.

The sentence had repetition ('I found I found'), incorrect word 'depths' instead of 'apps', and awkward phrasing. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I found I found out different depths is Instagram, it is same similar apps of Facebook and when I share my feelings, photos, videos and I learn too many. I learned many things educational purpose also things.

✓ I found out about different apps like Instagram; it is a similar app to Facebook. When I share my feelings, photos, and videos, I also learn many things for educational purposes.

The phrase 'learn too many' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'learn many things'. Also, 'educational purpose' should be plural 'educational purposes' and preceded by 'for'.

× I learned many things educational purpose also things.

✓ I learned many things for educational purposes as well.

The phrase lacked prepositions and proper conjunctions to connect ideas clearly.

× I already used a lot of apps, uh, when I find out in future a good apps I used, uh, uh, I using this app, I will using this app and it's a it's it's depend on future.

✓ I have already used a lot of apps. When I find a good app in the future, I will use it. I am using this app now, and I will continue to use it. It depends on the future.

The original sentence mixed tenses incorrectly and had awkward phrasing. Using present perfect 'have already used', future tense 'will use', and present continuous 'am using' clarifies the timeline and intention.

× when I find out in future a good apps I used

✓ When I find a good app in the future, I will use it.

'A good apps' is incorrect because 'apps' is plural and 'a' is singular. Changing to 'a good app' corrects the quantifier usage.