App— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp, đồng thời thiếu sự mạch lạc và rõ ràng. Bạn nên tránh sử dụng các từ không rõ ràng như "take talk" và "take uh", cũng như nên sắp xếp câu trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và có cấu trúc tốt hơn. Hãy sử dụng các từ vựng chính xác và tránh lặp lại không cần thiết.

Example: I have recently used social media apps like TikTok and YouTube to relax after studying. I also enjoy playing games, especially fashion and horror genres, which help me express my emotions.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời chưa hoàn chỉnh và có lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: "bars" thay vì "apps"). Bạn nên trả lời đầy đủ câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và hoàn thiện câu trả lời tránh bỏ dở giữa chừng.

Example: I am usually interested in social media apps such as TikTok and YouTube because they help me stay connected with friends and relax. Additionally, I enjoy playing games on my phone during my free time.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để rõ ràng hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "another apps" thay vì "other apps". Hãy trình bày ý tưởng một cách logic và cụ thể hơn.

Example: I usually find new apps through recommendations from my parents and friends. For example, Facebook often suggests new games, which makes it easy for me to explore different options.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: "interesting it Chinese people" nên là "interested in Chinese people"). Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và từ vựng phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và chính xác hơn.

Example: In the future, I would like to use more Chinese apps because I am interested in Chinese culture. For example, I want to use WeChat to connect with people from China. I am also interested in exploring Pinduoduo because it offers a wide variety of products that are not available in my country.

× I usually use social media and apps games for UH.

✓ I usually use social media and app games for UH.

The phrase 'apps games' is incorrect because 'apps' is plural and 'games' is also plural, but here 'app games' is a compound noun meaning games that are apps. The correct form is 'app games' (singular 'app' as an adjective modifying 'games').

× I usually use uh social media such as take talk YouTube or take uh messengers to chat with my friends going around it to relax after a long hours of studying.

✓ I usually use social media such as TikTok, YouTube, or messengers to chat with my friends and relax after long hours of studying.

The original sentence has incorrect prepositions and unnecessary words like 'take' and 'going around it'. Also, 'a long hours' is incorrect because 'hours' is plural and should not have 'a'. The corrected sentence removes these errors and uses proper prepositions and conjunctions.

× I usually play games such as fashion or horror games to express my emotions and lovings.

✓ I usually play games such as fashion or horror games to express my emotions and feelings.

The word 'lovings' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'feelings'. Also, 'fashion games' is acceptable if referring to a genre, but 'lovings' is not a proper noun here.

× There are many kinds of bars that are usually interesting it

✓ There are many kinds of apps that are usually interesting.

The word 'bars' is a typo or incorrect word; it should be 'apps'. Also, 'interesting it' is incorrect; 'interesting' alone suffices.

× First of all is social media like Tiktok or YouTube or messengers to stay connected with my friends and relax after a long hour of studying.

✓ First of all, there is social media like TikTok, YouTube, or messengers to stay connected with my friends and relax after long hours of studying.

'A long hour' is incorrect because 'hour' is singular but the context implies multiple hours. Also, the sentence structure is improved by adding 'there is' for clarity.

× Besides, I love playing games so I usually.

✓ Besides, I love playing games, so I usually play them.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb after 'usually'. The correction completes the sentence for clarity.

× Usually I discover popular social media like YouTube or Facebook through my parents and my friends because I chose their opinion.

✓ Usually, I discover popular social media like YouTube or Facebook through my parents and my friends because I choose their opinions.

The verb 'chose' is past tense but the context is present habitual action, so 'choose' is correct. Also, 'opinion' should be plural 'opinions' because it refers to multiple people.

× Another apps that I find is my new games because I find them on the suggestion of Facebook which make them easy to explore different options.

✓ Another app that I find is a new game because I find it on the suggestion of Facebook, which makes it easy to explore different options.

'Another apps' is incorrect because 'another' is used with singular nouns; it should be 'another app'. Also, 'my new games' is plural but the sentence refers to a singular app/game. The verbs 'make' and pronouns are adjusted accordingly.

× In the future, I'd like to use more Chinese app because I'm interesting it Chinese people.

✓ In the future, I'd like to use more Chinese apps because I'm interested in Chinese people.

'Interesting' is an adjective meaning causing interest; the correct form is 'interested' to express the speaker's feeling. Also, 'app' should be plural 'apps' to match 'more'. The preposition 'in' is needed after 'interested'.

× First of all, I want to use WeChat to make friends with people from China.

✓ First of all, I want to use WeChat to make friends with people from China.

This sentence is correct and requires no correction.

× I also like to explore Pub Taba because it provide wide variety of products that I can find on my own country.

✓ I also like to explore Pub Taba because it provides a wide variety of products that I can find in my own country.

The verb 'provide' should be 'provides' to agree with singular subject 'it'. Also, 'on my own country' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in my own country'. The article 'a' is needed before 'wide variety'.