App— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but lacks natural flow and contains some grammatical errors. Try to use more natural expressions and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of 'go over the Facebook', say 'browse Facebook'. Also, avoid repeating 'WhatsApp' unnecessarily. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Recently, I've been using WhatsApp, Instagram, and Facebook. I usually browse Facebook to catch up on news and stay in touch with friends. WhatsApp is mainly for work communication, where my colleagues and I chat regularly.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your ideas clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to connect your points. Also, be specific about the apps and their purposes.

Example: I am usually interested in apps related to personal fitness and self-motivation because they help me stay healthy and focused. Additionally, I use educational apps like Colin GRE to practice English and improve my skills.

Suggestion: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrasing and grammar errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words like 'also' or 'in addition'. Provide specific examples to support your answer.

Example: I usually find new apps by browsing social media, where people often share recommendations. Also, I get suggestions from my friends and family. For example, a friend recommended an engineering app that I found very useful.

Suggestion: Your answer has good ideas but is not clearly expressed. Try to use simpler sentences and correct grammar. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be more specific about the app's functions.

Example: In the future, I would like to use more sophisticated apps that can understand the user's emotions and personality. For example, an app that can suggest activities or advice based on how I feel to improve my daily life.

× I like to go over the Facebook for the news and to catch up with my friends.

✓ I like to go over Facebook for the news and to catch up with my friends.

In English, we do not use the definite article 'the' before the names of most social media platforms like Facebook. Using 'the' here is incorrect. The correct form is simply 'Facebook'.

× We like to chat over the WhatsApp.

✓ We like to chat on WhatsApp.

The preposition 'on' is used with platforms or apps when referring to communication, not 'over'. 'Chat on WhatsApp' is the correct expression.

× The app related to personal fitness and the self motivation are the apps.

✓ The apps related to personal fitness and self-motivation are the apps.

The subject refers to multiple apps, so the plural form 'apps' should be used instead of 'app'. Also, 'self motivation' should be hyphenated as 'self-motivation' to form a compound noun.

× I like it very much.

✓ I like them very much.

Since the subject refers to multiple apps (plural), the pronoun should be plural 'them' instead of singular 'it'.

× On the other hand, I have related to certain course, the chapter or the knowledge and also kept engaging on me.

✓ On the other hand, I have used apps related to certain courses, chapters, or knowledge and have also kept myself engaged.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. The phrase 'I have related to' is incorrect; it should be 'I have used apps related to'. Also, 'kept engaging on me' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'kept myself engaged'.

× For example, I have downloaded Colin GRE for the English practice.

✓ For example, I have downloaded Colin GRE for English practice.

'English practice' is an uncountable noun phrase and does not require the article 'the'. Removing 'the' makes the sentence correct.

× Well, thereby judgment over the social media are the easiest way that I found different apps on the other hand, I.

✓ Well, judging social media is the easiest way that I find different apps; on the other hand, I

The phrase 'thereby judgment over the social media' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'judging social media'. Also, 'are' should be 'is' to agree with the singular subject 'way'. The sentence is incomplete but corrected as far as possible.

× Get information from my friends and the family members such as school engineering is from my friend.

✓ I get information from my friends and family members; for example, school engineering information is from my friend.

The original sentence lacks a subject and proper structure. Adding 'I' as the subject and clarifying the example improves clarity and grammar.

× Well I like the app to be more sophisticated and know the nature of the phone user now such as the app which can read the emotion or the temperament of a person and make some suggest them to make their life.

✓ Well, I would like the app to be more sophisticated and understand the nature of the phone user, such as an app that can read the emotions or temperament of a person and make some suggestions to improve their life.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'know' should be 'understand' to match the subject; 'make some suggest them' is incorrect and should be 'make some suggestions'; 'the emotion' should be plural 'emotions'; and the sentence structure is improved for clarity.