App— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp hơn, ví dụ như sử dụng thì hiện tại hoàn thành để nói về thói quen gần đây. Ngoài ra, hãy tránh lặp từ và thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Recently, I have been using TikTok a lot. I often scroll through various videos on the app every day because they make me feel happy and relaxed.

Suggestion: Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và ngữ pháp, đồng thời sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu trôi chảy hơn.

Example: I am usually interested in entertainment apps such as YouTube and TikTok because they have many funny and enjoyable videos that make me very happy.

Suggestion: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng thì đúng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I watching'. Ngoài ra, nên dùng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Actually, many apps like YouTube, Facebook, and TikTok come pre-installed on my phone. I also discover new apps by watching advertisements on Facebook.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh dùng từ không chính xác và câu bị rối. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng để diễn đạt ý tưởng.

Example: I am not sure which apps I will use in the future because the ones I use now are very entertaining and I like them. However, I believe there will be many new apps as technology advances, and I am looking forward to trying them.

× The app that I recently used a Tiktok.

✓ The app that I recently used is TikTok.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' to link the subject and the complement. Also, 'a Tiktok' is incorrect because 'TikTok' is a proper noun and does not need an article. The correct form is 'is TikTok.'

× These days I always scrolling through video on Tiktok day by day.

✓ These days I am always scrolling through videos on TikTok day by day.

The verb 'scrolling' needs an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. Also, 'video' should be plural 'videos' because it refers to multiple items. The correct form is 'I am always scrolling through videos.'

× This video make me funny and relax.

✓ These videos make me laugh and relax.

'Video' should be plural 'videos' to match the plural verb 'make.' Also, 'make me funny' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'make me laugh.' 'Relax' is fine but should be parallel with 'laugh.'

× The kind of us I interested in is uh entertaining up like YouTube or TikTok because in this apps there are many video funny entertaining and it make me very happy.

✓ The kind of apps I am interested in are entertaining apps like YouTube or TikTok because in these apps there are many funny and entertaining videos and they make me very happy.

'Us' should be 'apps' to refer to the subject. 'I interested' needs the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous. 'This apps' should be 'these apps' to match plural. 'Video funny entertaining' should be 'funny and entertaining videos.' 'It make' should be 'they make' to agree with plural subject.

× Actually many apps in mobile phone are default setting like YouTube or Facebook and tiktok.

✓ Actually, many apps on mobile phones are default settings like YouTube, Facebook, and TikTok.

The preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to apps on a device. 'Mobile phone' should be plural 'mobile phones' to generalize. 'Default setting' should be plural 'default settings' to match 'many apps.'

× I find out it when I watching advertisement in Facebook.

✓ I found out about it when I was watching an advertisement on Facebook.

The verb 'find out' should be in past tense 'found out' to match the past action. 'I watching' needs auxiliary 'was' to form past continuous. 'Advertisement' needs an article 'an.' The preposition 'in' should be 'on' for Facebook.

× That's what I find out this app.

✓ That's how I found out about this app.

The sentence structure is incorrect. 'That's what I find out this app' is ungrammatical. The correct expression is 'That's how I found out about this app.'

× I don't know because these are that I use are now raised is very entertaining and I love it.

✓ I don't know because the apps that I use now are very entertaining and I love them.

The sentence has pronoun and structure errors. 'These are that I use are now raised' is incorrect. It should be 'the apps that I use now.' 'Is' should be 'are' to agree with plural 'apps.' 'I love it' should be 'I love them' to refer to plural 'apps.'

× But in the future, I think there's a many new app because the technology is high and I'm, uh, awaiting for this.

✓ But in the future, I think there will be many new apps because technology is advancing and I'm, uh, looking forward to this.

'There's a many new app' is incorrect; it should be 'there will be many new apps' to express future tense and plural. 'Technology is high' is unnatural; 'technology is advancing' is better. 'Awaiting for' is incorrect; 'looking forward to' is the correct phrase.