App— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and improving sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Recently, I have been using the Podcast app on my iPad almost every day because it helps me improve my general knowledge and English speaking skills.

Suggestion: Avoid filler words and repetition. Use clearer vocabulary and structure your answer with a topic sentence followed by supporting details using linking words.

Example: I am usually interested in apps like Pinterest and Podcast because they allow me to explore creative ideas and listen to interesting content, which feels similar to paging through magazines.

Suggestion: Avoid hesitation sounds and be more specific. Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words for coherence.

Example: I usually discover new apps through Instagram. However, some of my favorite apps are those I have used since I was a child, so I don't exactly remember when I first found them.

Suggestion: Improve grammar and clarity by using correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Example: In the future, I would prefer to use apps without AI because I believe relying on AI might reduce our ability to relax naturally. Also, I want to use apps that many people find interesting.

× My most recent app that I use, I think is Podcast in my iPad, which is a app that I use like every single day for my general knowledge and improving my social skills and talking in English.

✓ My most recent app that I use, I think, is the Podcast on my iPad, which is an app that I use like every single day for my general knowledge and improving my social skills and talking in English.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a vowel sound as in 'app'. Also, 'Podcast' is a specific app, so it requires the definite article 'the'. Additionally, 'in my iPad' should be 'on my iPad' because we use 'on' for devices like tablets.

× Well I love and adore Pinterest and podcast. These are the 2 like most used apps apps in my phone and my iPad and they really makes me feel like I'm like umm.

✓ Well, I love and adore Pinterest and Podcast. These are the two most used apps on my phone and my iPad and they really make me feel like I'm like umm.

The word 'apps apps' is repeated and should be singular 'apps'. '2' should be written as 'two' in formal speech. 'Makes' should be 'make' to agree with the plural subject 'apps'. Also, 'in my phone' should be 'on my phone' because we use 'on' for devices.

× These are the 2 like most used apps apps in my phone and my iPad and they really makes me feel like I'm like umm.

✓ These are the two most used apps on my phone and my iPad and they really make me feel like I'm like umm.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to apps on devices; the correct preposition is 'on'.

× I think I usually find them in Instagram, on Instagram, but the ones that I really like are the ones that I found since I was like 7 or maybe 8.

✓ I think I usually find them on Instagram, but the ones that I really like are the ones that I have found since I was like 7 or maybe 8.

The present perfect tense 'have found' is appropriate here to indicate an action that started in the past and continues to the present. Also, 'in Instagram' should be 'on Instagram'.

× I think I usually find them in Instagram, on Instagram, but the ones that I really like are the ones that I found since I was like 7 or maybe 8.

✓ I think I usually find them on Instagram, but the ones that I really like are the ones that I have found since I was like 7 or maybe 8.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect for social media platforms; 'on' is the correct preposition.

× I think I would love to use the ones that has no AI in it.

✓ I think I would love to use the ones that have no AI in them.

The subject 'ones' is plural, so the verb should be 'have' instead of 'has'. Also, 'in it' should be 'in them' to agree with the plural 'ones'.

× I think I would love to use the ones that has no AI in it.

✓ I think I would love to use the ones that have no AI in them.

The preposition 'in' is correct, but the pronoun should be plural 'them' to match 'ones'.

× I think using AI as a thing that makes us like feel comfortable as not a good way to calm and relax.

✓ I think using AI as something that makes us feel comfortable is not a good way to calm and relax.

The original sentence has awkward structure and unnecessary words like 'like' and 'as'. Simplifying the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× And I would like to use the ones that has people interested in it.

✓ And I would like to use the ones that have people interested in them.

The subject 'ones' is plural, so the verb should be 'have' instead of 'has'. Also, 'in it' should be 'in them' to agree with the plural 'ones'.