App— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to be more direct and concise, and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences.

Example: I usually use my mobile phone when I have free time to explore new things. Recently, I have been using Instagram, Snapchat, and WhatsApp to stay connected with my friends.

Suggestion: Your answer repeats ideas and has grammatical mistakes. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to avoid repetition and improve coherence.

Example: I am usually interested in social media apps such as Instagram and Snapchat because they help me stay connected with my friends. Additionally, I enjoy playing games like PUBG with them, which makes the experience more fun.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and better sentence structure. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and avoid repetition.

Example: I find out about different apps through advertisements I see on other apps. Moreover, my friends often recommend useful apps to me, which helps me discover new ones.

Suggestion: Your answer is short and lacks detail. Try to provide more specific reasons and use a clear structure with linking words to make your answer more effective.

Example: In the future, I would like to continue using WhatsApp because it is a popular app that helps me stay connected with my friends and family easily. Additionally, it offers various features like voice and video calls, which I find very useful.

× Generally I did not use my mobile phone, but I use my mobile phone when I was totally free and to explore new things.

✓ Generally I did not use my mobile phone, but I used my mobile phone when I was totally free and to explore new things.

The sentence mixes past tense 'did not use' with present tense 'use'. To maintain consistency, 'use' should be changed to past tense 'used' because the context is about past actions.

× I love to use Instagram, Snapchat and WhatsApp for to connect it with my friends.

✓ I love to use Instagram, Snapchat and WhatsApp to connect with my friends.

The phrase 'for to connect it with my friends' is incorrect. The correct form is 'to connect with my friends'. The preposition 'with' is used to indicate connection with people, and 'it' is unnecessary here.

× I am interested in social media apps like Instagrams and Snapchat and the games PUBG.

✓ I am interested in social media apps like Instagram and Snapchat and the game PUBG.

'Instagrams' is incorrect as Instagram is a singular app name and should not be pluralized. Also, 'games PUBG' should be 'game PUBG' because PUBG is a single game.

× I really like to play with my friends and Instagram I use to stay connected with my friends to conversations with my friends.

✓ I really like to play with my friends and I use Instagram to stay connected with my friends and have conversations with them.

The original sentence is awkward and has incorrect prepositions. 'To conversations with my friends' is incorrect; it should be 'have conversations with them'. Also, adding 'I' before 'use Instagram' improves sentence structure.

× There are some advertisement that I see on other apps.

✓ There are some advertisements that I see on other apps.

'Advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to agree with 'some'. This is a singular/plural issue affecting pronoun agreement.

× Then I know about different apps and sometimes my friends tell me that this app is a great app and you can also use this app.

✓ Then I learn about different apps and sometimes my friends tell me that this app is great and I can also use it.

'Know about' is less appropriate here; 'learn about' fits better. Also, 'you can also use this app' should be 'I can also use it' to maintain consistency in pronouns. Repetition of 'app' is reduced for clarity.

× I really like to WhatsApp in my future because it is a very common app that everyone uses to stay connected with friends and family.

✓ I would really like to use WhatsApp in the future because it is a very common app that everyone uses to stay connected with friends and family.

'Like to WhatsApp' is incorrect; 'use WhatsApp' is correct. Also, expressing future intention requires modal 'would like to' instead of 'like to' for politeness and correctness.