App— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and could be more concise. Try to avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas like 'beneficial' and 'advantageous' together. Also, include linking words to make your answer flow better and add a bit more specific detail about the type of information you get.

Example: I have recently used Instagram daily, especially to scroll through reels. It provides me with useful information about current events and trends, which I find very helpful for staying informed.

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit long and contains some grammatical errors. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words like 'because' or 'for example'. Also, avoid repeating phrases like 'get knowledge and information from Internet'.

Example: I am usually interested in productivity and social media apps. For example, I use MS Word to complete my assignments and Instagram to stay updated with news and connect with friends because these apps are convenient and useful.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and contains some grammatical mistakes. Try to use linking words like 'so' or 'therefore' properly and avoid vague phrases like 'it is also benefited'. Also, be more specific about how ads influence your decision to install apps.

Example: I usually find out about new apps through advertisements on YouTube and Instagram. When I see an ad for an app that seems useful, I install it to explore its features and see if it can help me.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and could be more organized. Try to avoid repeating similar words like 'beneficial' and 'advantageous'. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas and be more specific about how you will use these apps in the future.

Example: In the future, I plan to continue using WhatsApp and Instagram because they help me stay connected with friends. For instance, I will use them to chat, share updates about my assignments, work, and personal experiences.

× Well definitely I use Instagram in my daily life because I scroll the reels and I get a lot of information from Internet and it is very beneficial and advantageous way to get knowledge from Internet.

✓ Well, definitely I use Instagram in my daily life because I scroll through the reels and get a lot of information from the Internet, and it is a very beneficial and advantageous way to get knowledge from the Internet.

The sentence needed the preposition 'through' after 'scroll' to be grammatically correct (related to preposition use, but since 'scroll' is a verb that requires 'through' here, it is considered present tense usage). Also, 'from Internet' requires the definite article 'the' before 'Internet'. Adding commas improves clarity. These corrections align with proper present tense usage and article use.

× Well definitely I use Instagram in my daily life because I scroll the reels and I get a lot of information from Internet and it is very beneficial and advantageous way to get knowledge from Internet.

✓ Well, definitely I use Instagram in my daily life because I scroll through the reels and get a lot of information from the Internet, and it is a very beneficial and advantageous way to get knowledge from the Internet.

The verb 'scroll' requires the preposition 'through' when referring to content like reels. Also, 'from Internet' is incorrect; it should be 'from the Internet' because 'Internet' is a unique entity and requires the definite article 'the'.

× Well on my daily life I use a lot of apps but mostly I use Ms. Word and Instagram and many other apps to made my assignments as well as get information from Internet because these are very convenient and advantageous way to get knowledge and information from Internet.

✓ Well, in my daily life I use a lot of apps but mostly I use Ms. Word and Instagram and many other apps to make my assignments as well as get information from the Internet because these are very convenient and advantageous ways to get knowledge and information from the Internet.

The phrase 'on my daily life' should be 'in my daily life' because 'in' is the correct preposition for periods of time or life contexts. Also, 'made' is past tense and should be 'make' to match the present tense context. 'From Internet' requires 'the' before 'Internet'. 'Way' should be plural 'ways' to agree with 'these'. These corrections improve preposition use and verb tense consistency.

× Well on my daily life I use a lot of apps but mostly I use Ms. Word and Instagram and many other apps to made my assignments as well as get information from Internet because these are very convenient and advantageous way to get knowledge and information from Internet.

✓ Well, in my daily life I use a lot of apps but mostly I use Ms. Word and Instagram and many other apps to make my assignments as well as get information from the Internet because these are very convenient and advantageous ways to get knowledge and information from the Internet.

'Made' is the past tense of 'make' and is incorrect here because the sentence is in present tense describing habitual actions. The correct form is 'make' to maintain present tense consistency.

× Well, I saw a lot of ads uh on YouTube as well as on Instagram. These ads give information about new apps. So the new apps I will install and get information from them and it is also benefited.

✓ Well, I saw a lot of ads on YouTube as well as on Instagram. These ads give information about new apps. So I will install the new apps and get information from them, and it is also beneficial.

The phrase 'it is also benefited' is incorrect; 'benefited' is a past participle and does not fit here. The correct adjective is 'beneficial'. Also, 'the new apps I will install' is awkward; reordering to 'I will install the new apps' improves clarity. The preposition use is correct otherwise.

× So the new apps I will install and get information from them and it is also benefited.

✓ So I will install the new apps and get information from them, and it is also beneficial.

The modal verb 'will' is correctly used to express future intention. However, the sentence structure was awkward and 'benefited' was incorrectly used instead of 'beneficial'. Reordering the sentence and correcting the adjective improves clarity and correctness.

× Well, in my future, I will use WhatsApp as well as Instagram, uh, because those apps are beneficial and advantageous for me. So those as I will use and chat with my friends and share information about my assignments, work and my diary to my friends.

✓ Well, in the future, I will use WhatsApp as well as Instagram because those apps are beneficial and advantageous for me. So I will use those to chat with my friends and share information about my assignments, work, and my diary with my friends.

The phrase 'in my future' is better expressed as 'in the future'. The sentence 'So those as I will use' is ungrammatical and should be 'So I will use those'. Also, 'share information about my assignments, work and my diary to my friends' should use 'with my friends' instead of 'to my friends' for correct preposition use. These corrections improve future tense expression and preposition use.