App— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer should be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases like 'latest technology lattice function'.

Example: Recently, I have been using WhatsApp, which is very popular worldwide. It allows me to send messages, pictures, and voice recordings easily, making communication very convenient.

Suggestion: Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific examples. Avoid asking questions back to the examiner and improve sentence structure for clarity.

Example: I am usually interested in practical apps like Google Maps for navigation, WhatsApp for messaging, and Amazon for shopping daily essentials. These apps help me manage my daily tasks efficiently.

Suggestion: Your answer should be clearer and more structured. Begin with a topic sentence, then explain the process using linking words. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences to make your answer more coherent.

Example: I usually find new apps by browsing the Google Play Store on my Android phone or the Apple App Store on my iPhone. I type the app name or keywords, and then I choose from the list of available apps to download.

Suggestion: Try to give a clear and direct answer with a topic sentence. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid filler words like 'umm' and 'uh'. Be specific about the features you want in future apps.

Example: In the future, I would like to use an app that combines multiple features, such as food delivery, navigation, and messaging, so I don't have to switch between different apps for different needs.

× I recently used the one new app that is called WhatsApp that is more popular in whole world with the latest technology lattice function where I can send message and picture and send also voice recorder that is very user beneficial.

✓ I recently used a new app called WhatsApp, which is very popular worldwide and has the latest technology features where I can send messages, pictures, and voice recordings that are very useful for users.

The sentence has singular and plural issues such as 'the one new app' should be 'a new app', 'in whole world' should be 'worldwide', 'send message and picture' should be 'send messages and pictures', and 'voice recorder' should be 'voice recordings'. Correct plural forms and articles improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Would you prefer the apps which are requirement of inventory use like Google Maps, WhatsApp? I use Google Maps for getting direction to go any places, WhatsApp use for messaging and also I found Amazon is more beneficial where I can get the latest product for my daily use.

✓ Do you prefer apps that are required for everyday use like Google Maps and WhatsApp? I use Google Maps to get directions to go to any place, WhatsApp for messaging, and I also find Amazon more beneficial where I can get the latest products for my daily use.

The sentence has plural and singular issues such as 'requirement of inventory use' should be 'required for everyday use', 'getting direction' should be 'get directions', 'any places' should be 'any place', 'WhatsApp use' should be 'WhatsApp for', and 'latest product' should be 'latest products'. Correct use of singular and plural forms and prepositions improves sentence correctness.

× I use Google Maps for getting direction to go any places, WhatsApp use for messaging and also I found Amazon is more beneficial where I can get the latest product for my daily use.

✓ I use Google Maps to get directions to go to any place, WhatsApp for messaging, and I also find Amazon more beneficial where I can get the latest products for my daily use.

The phrase 'for getting direction to go any places' is incorrect. It should be 'to get directions to go to any place'. The preposition 'to' is needed before 'go', and 'directions' should be plural. Also, 'any places' should be 'any place' to match the context.

× I scroll and in Android phone I scroll in Google Play store and in Apple iPhone I browse there in their store Apple store I found related apps what I require at that moment I just type the name that so on a list of apps to be downloaded and from among us to.

✓ I scroll on my Android phone in the Google Play Store, and on an Apple iPhone, I browse the Apple Store. I find related apps that I require at that moment by typing the name, and then I see a list of apps to download, including Among Us.

The sentence has plural and article issues such as 'Google Play store' should be 'Google Play Store', 'Apple store' should be 'Apple Store', 'related apps what I require' should be 'related apps that I require', and 'so on a list of apps' should be 'see a list of apps'. Correct capitalization and plural forms improve clarity.

× I like someone's which have all the feature of other app. I don't need to, umm, browse, uh, separate apps for separate requirement. I want a all things in one of only I have to dictate whether I'm searching for food or whether I'm looking for map, whether I'm looking A and want to send a message.

✓ I like apps that have all the features of other apps. I don't need to browse separate apps for separate requirements. I want all things in one app where I only have to dictate whether I'm searching for food, looking for a map, or wanting to send a message.

The sentence has singular and plural issues such as 'someone's' should be 'apps', 'all the feature' should be 'all the features', 'other app' should be 'other apps', 'separate requirement' should be 'separate requirements', and 'a all things' should be 'all things'. Correct plural forms and article usage improve grammatical accuracy.