App— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to avoid repetition and filler words like "uh" and "but". Use correct article usage (e.g., "a plethora of apps") and ensure subject-verb agreement. Also, structure your answer clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details, and keep it concise within 5 sentences.

Example: Recently, I have been using an app called IELTS English Speaking, which helps me improve my fluency and boosts my confidence in speaking English.

Suggestion: Focus on grammatical accuracy and avoid repetition. Use linking words like "because" to connect ideas smoothly. Also, be specific about why you like shopping apps and keep your answer clear and concise.

Example: I am usually interested in shopping apps because they offer better discounts, and it's easy to return products online if I am not satisfied.

Suggestion: Avoid repeating words and filler sounds. Use correct prepositions and article usage, for example, "on the Apple Store." Also, try to provide a more complete answer with linking words to make your response coherent.

Example: I find different apps on the Apple Store on my phone, where I can download any app I need because there are so many options available.

Suggestion: Make sure to pronounce and spell words correctly (e.g., "IELTS exam" not "eyelids exam"). Use plural forms appropriately ("game apps" instead of "game app" if referring generally). Also, provide a clear topic sentence and supporting details with linking words.

Example: After I finish my IELTS exam, I would like to use game apps to help me relax my mind during my busy schedule.

× There are plethora of the apps but but currently I have used uh app of islets English speaking UH which help uh helps me to improve my fluency in English and give me confidence.

✓ There is a plethora of apps, but currently I have used an app called Islets English Speaking which helps me to improve my fluency in English and gives me confidence.

The phrase 'plethora of the apps' is incorrect because 'plethora' is a singular noun and requires the article 'a' before it, and 'the' is unnecessary here. Also, 'app of islets English speaking' is unclear and should be 'an app called Islets English Speaking'. The verbs 'help' and 'gives' need to agree with the singular subject 'app', so 'helps' and 'gives' are correct.

× Usually I interested in shopping apps because by using this these apps I can get better discount and it's it's it is easy to return the goods through online and if I don't like the product.

✓ Usually I am interested in shopping apps because by using these apps I can get better discounts and it's easy to return the goods online if I don't like the product.

The sentence is missing the verb 'am' after 'I' to form the present tense 'I am interested'. 'This these apps' is incorrect; it should be 'these apps'. 'Better discount' should be plural 'better discounts' to match the context. 'Through online' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'online' without 'through'.

× I find find out different apps on my phone Apple store. There are so many apps, uh, whichever I need, I can download.

✓ I find different apps on my phone's Apple Store. There are so many apps; whichever I need, I can download.

The phrase 'find find out' is redundant; only 'find' is needed. 'My phone Apple store' lacks possessive form; it should be 'my phone's Apple Store'. The sentence structure is improved by using a semicolon to connect related clauses.

× After giving my eyelids exam, I would like to use the game app which help me to relax my mind in my busy schedule.

✓ After taking my IELTS exam, I would like to use a game app which helps me to relax my mind during my busy schedule.

The phrase 'giving my eyelids exam' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'taking my IELTS exam'. 'The game app' should be 'a game app' as it is not a specific app previously mentioned. The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'app'. 'In my busy schedule' is better expressed as 'during my busy schedule'.