App— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答が少し不自然で文法的な誤りがあります。例えば、「I listen to Lee」は意味が不明瞭で、「YouTube's have」という表現も誤りです。より自然な英語表現を使い、文を簡潔にまとめることが必要です。

Example: Recently, I have used Instagram and YouTube. I find YouTube very useful because it offers many videos to help me study English, which gives me a new perspective.

Suggestion: 回答が不明瞭で文法的な誤りが多いです。「I found it interesting. On watching YouTube」という表現は不自然で、内容も繰り返しが多いです。より明確で簡潔な表現を心がけ、具体的な例を整理して述べると良いでしょう。

Example: I am usually interested in educational apps, especially YouTube. For example, I often watch videos that help me study English.

Suggestion: 発音や単語の選択に誤りがあり、意味が伝わりにくい部分があります（例：「apples」ではなく「apps」）。また、文の構造が不自然で、話の流れが途切れています。正しい単語を使い、文を整理して話す練習が必要です。

Example: It depends on the situation. Sometimes my friends recommend apps to me, and other times I search online for useful apps to help me study English or prepare for exams.

Suggestion: 単語の誤用（「apples」ではなく「apps」）や文法の誤りが多く、意味が不明瞭です。より正確な語彙を使い、文を簡潔にまとめる練習が必要です。

Example: In the future, I would like to use apps that help me with my job. I think they can improve my efficiency and save me time.

× I listen to Lee, have used Instagram and YouTube because it's giving me a new perspective and YouTube's have a lot of useful information to study English so I think it is very important and convenient.

✓ I listen to Lee, have used Instagram and YouTube because they give me a new perspective and YouTube has a lot of useful information to study English, so I think it is very important and convenient.

The verb 'it's giving' should be in simple present tense 'they give' to match the habitual action. Also, 'YouTube's have' is incorrect; 'YouTube has' is correct because 'YouTube' is singular. This is a present tense issue and subject-verb agreement.

× I found it interesting. On watching YouTube because they provide many useful things to me. For example, I always watch studying for studying English video.

✓ I find it interesting to watch YouTube because they provide many useful things to me. For example, I always watch videos for studying English.

The sentence structure is incorrect. 'I found it interesting. On watching YouTube' is fragmented and unclear. It should be 'I find it interesting to watch YouTube'. Also, 'I always watch studying for studying English video' is awkward; it should be 'I always watch videos for studying English.' This corrects sentence structure errors.

× Sometimes my friend recommended it to me. On the other hand I search for useful apples to study English or umm anti exam my.

✓ Sometimes my friend recommends it to me. On the other hand, I search for useful apps to study English or for anti-exam apps.

The preposition 'on the other hand' should be followed by a comma. Also, 'apples' is a wrong word; it should be 'apps'. The phrase 'anti exam my' is unclear and likely meant 'anti-exam apps'. This corrects preposition use and word choice.

× I do like to use help for apples to my job. Umm I think it helps me stay efficiency and give me up save my time.

✓ I would like to use helpful apps for my job. I think they help me stay efficient and save my time.

'I do like to use help for apples to my job' is incorrect. The modal verb 'would like' is appropriate for expressing future desire. 'Help for apples' should be 'helpful apps'. 'Stay efficiency' should be 'stay efficient'. 'Give me up save my time' is incorrect; 'save my time' suffices. This corrects modal verb usage and word choice.