App— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but contains some repetition and grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating words and make your sentences more natural and concise. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: Recently, I have been using navigation apps because they are very helpful when I want to find new places. For example, whenever I visit an unfamiliar area, I rely on these apps to guide me efficiently.

Suggestion: Your answer has unclear expressions and some grammar mistakes. Avoid awkward phrases like 'time flight' and 'cherry on top' unless used correctly. Try to explain your interest clearly and use appropriate linking words.

Example: I am usually interested in game apps because they are exciting and help me relax. Moreover, playing games makes time pass quickly, which I really enjoy.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical errors. Make sure to complete your sentences and avoid repetition. Also, clarify your ideas and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: I often find out about new apps through my friends because they like to share useful information. For instance, they recommend apps that can improve our daily lives, such as navigation or health apps.

Suggestion: Your answer is fragmented and unclear. Avoid starting sentences with conjunctions like 'And' and complete your thoughts fully. Use clear and natural sentences to express your future preferences.

Example: In the future, I would like to continue using navigation apps because they help me find new routes easily and save time when I travel.

× These days I I have used navigation apps because it is useful when I search for new places.

✓ These days I have used navigation apps because they are useful when I search for new places.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'it' to refer to 'navigation apps', which is plural. The pronoun should be 'they' to agree with the plural noun. Also, the repeated 'I' is a typographical error and should be removed.

× So when I go to unfamiliar place I use it.

✓ So when I go to an unfamiliar place, I use it.

The phrase 'unfamiliar place' is singular and needs an article 'an' before it. Also, a comma after the introductory clause improves clarity.

× In my case, I'm interested in game apps because these apps are exciting and when I use these apps time flight, so using this is the cherry on top.

✓ In my case, I'm interested in game apps because these apps are exciting and when I use these apps, time flies, so using them is the cherry on top.

The phrase 'time flight' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'time flies'. Also, 'using this' should be 'using them' to refer to 'game apps' (plural). A comma is added after 'apps' for clarity.

× Sometimes my friends recommended me to use other apps because she she wanted to share good information about new apps.

✓ Sometimes my friends recommended that I use other apps because they wanted to share good information about new apps.

The pronoun 'me' is incorrect after 'recommended'; the correct structure is 'recommended that I use'. Also, 'she she' is a repetition error and should be 'they' to agree with 'friends' (plural).

× So these maps actually improves our lives.

✓ So these apps actually improve our lives.

The word 'maps' seems to be a typo for 'apps' based on context. Also, 'improves' should be 'improve' to agree with the plural subject 'apps'.

× And in the future I want to use. Steel navigation apps because. It's all good to find a new path, so I used it.

✓ In the future, I want to use navigation apps because they are good for finding new paths.

The original sentence has incomplete and fragmented sentences. 'Steel navigation apps' is unclear; likely 'still navigation apps' or just 'navigation apps' is intended. 'It's all good to find a new path' is awkward; corrected to 'they are good for finding new paths'. The past tense 'I used it' is inconsistent with future intention and is removed.