App— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by using proper verb tenses and sentence structures. Also, avoid redundancy and be more specific about how you use these apps. For example, mention what you do on Instagram and WhatsApp specifically.

Example: Recently, I have been using apps like Instagram and WhatsApp regularly. I use WhatsApp mainly to keep in touch with my family through messages and calls, while on Instagram, I enjoy browsing photos and videos shared by my friends.

Suggestion: Improve your answer by correcting grammar and making it more fluent. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide a bit more detail about why you find these apps entertaining.

Example: I am usually interested in entertainment apps such as Instagram and Facebook because they allow me to watch short videos called reels, which I find very enjoyable and relaxing.

Suggestion: Focus on making your sentences clearer and more concise. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Example: I usually find out about new apps through my friends and sisters because they are very social. For instance, my sister recently told me about Twitter, which I started using not long ago.

Suggestion: Make your answer more natural by correcting grammar and sentence flow. Be specific about the type of app and how it would help you in your job. Use linking words to improve coherence.

Example: In the future, I would like to use apps related to my job at McDonald's. For example, an app that provides information about my work shifts and days off would be very helpful for managing my schedule.

× Well there are various type of apps but recently I use so many apps like Instagram and WhatsApp on regular basis.

✓ Well there are various types of apps but recently I use so many apps like Instagram and WhatsApp on a regular basis.

The word 'type' should be plural 'types' because it refers to multiple kinds of apps. Also, 'on regular basis' needs the article 'a' before 'regular basis' to be grammatically correct.

× Well there are various type of apps but recently I use so many apps like Instagram and WhatsApp on regular basis.

✓ Well there are various types of apps but recently I have used many apps like Instagram and WhatsApp on a regular basis.

The phrase 'recently I use' is incorrect because 'recently' indicates past time, so the present perfect tense 'have used' is appropriate to express actions that happened in the recent past.

× I use WhatsApp to talk to about my family.

✓ I use WhatsApp to talk about my family.

The preposition 'to' is unnecessary before 'about my family'. The correct phrase is 'talk about' something.

× Uh, mostly I'm interested in that apps which are more entertaining like Instagram and Facebook where I can see some reels.

✓ Uh, mostly I'm interested in those apps which are more entertaining like Instagram and Facebook where I can see some reels.

The demonstrative pronoun 'that' should be plural 'those' to agree with the plural noun 'apps'.

× Like my friends and sisters are very socially, so I get to know about the apps from my friends and my sisters as, uh, she recently, uh, gave me the information about the app, which is known as Twitter that I used recently.

✓ Like my friends and sisters are very social, so I get to know about the apps from them as, uh, one of them recently gave me information about an app called Twitter that I used recently.

The word 'socially' is an adverb but the sentence requires the adjective 'social' to describe 'friends and sisters'. Also, 'she' is unclear when referring to multiple people; 'one of them' clarifies the subject. 'The information' is better as 'information' without 'the' here, and 'which is known as Twitter' is better phrased as 'called Twitter'.

× I would like to use that apps in the future, which is about the job, like I'm working in McDonald's.

✓ I would like to use those apps in the future, which are about the job, like I'm working at McDonald's.

'That apps' should be 'those apps' to match plural noun. Also, 'which is' should be 'which are' to agree with plural 'apps'. The preposition 'in' before 'McDonald's' should be 'at' to indicate place of work.

× So I would like to, uh, to use that app which know which gives me information about my shifts and my day offs.

✓ So I would like to use that app which I know gives me information about my shifts and my days off.

The phrase 'which know which' is incorrect; it should be 'which I know'. Also, 'day offs' should be 'days off' as the correct plural form.