App— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant and provides a clear reason for using WeChat, but it is slightly repetitive with phrases like "the only communication, the only means of communication." Try to avoid redundancy and make your sentences more concise and natural. Also, adding a linking word to connect ideas would improve coherence.

Example: I've been using WeChat recently because my husband is Chinese and we currently live in China. Since other apps are restricted here, WeChat is the only way I can communicate with others.

Suggestion: Your answer starts well but is incomplete and ends abruptly. To improve, complete your sentences and provide specific details about why you like these apps. Use linking words like 'and' or 'also' to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: I'm usually interested in social media apps like Facebook because I can browse my friends' activities and life updates. Also, I use it to make calls and stay connected with people.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and incomplete, which affects coherence and effectiveness. Try to complete your thoughts and use proper linking words. Also, use more precise vocabulary and correct grammar to express how you discover apps.

Example: I usually find new apps by browsing the Apple Store, where I download apps useful for my work, personal life, and hobbies. Sometimes, I also discover apps through ads on Facebook.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve it by using more varied vocabulary and linking words to make it more natural and engaging. Also, try to avoid repeating similar ideas.

Example: In the future, I'd like to use social media apps because they help me stay in touch with my family and keep up with their photos and videos. Additionally, these apps offer a convenient way to communicate.

× Moreover, I can use these apps in calling and.

✓ Moreover, I can use these apps for calling.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used before the gerund 'calling'. The correct preposition to use with 'calling' in this context is 'for'. Therefore, 'in calling' should be corrected to 'for calling' to properly express the purpose of using the apps.

× I would know different apps if I'm searching Apple Store where I brought some apps that are useful in my work, my personal life and some of my hobbies.

✓ I would know different apps if I searched the Apple Store where I bought some apps that are useful in my work, my personal life and some of my hobbies.

The sentence mixes conditional and past tense incorrectly. 'I'm searching' should be in past tense 'I searched' to match the conditional 'would know'. Also, 'brought' is incorrect here; the correct past tense of 'buy' is 'bought'. Additionally, 'Apple Store' should have the definite article 'the' before it.