App— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Reduce hesitations and organize your answer with a clear topic sentence plus two supporting points. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'and' to make it coherent. Be specific about how you use each app.

Example: Recently I have used Telegram and WhatsApp. For example, I use Telegram mainly to follow news channels and receive updates, while I use WhatsApp to chat with colleagues and share documents. I also check both apps regularly for notifications.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence then two concise supporting details with precise vocabulary. Avoid long pauses and incomplete thoughts. Replace hesitations with short pauses and use linking words like 'also' and 'because' correctly.

Example: I'm usually interested in messaging apps such as WhatsApp and Telegram. I like them because they allow me to send messages quickly and share files at work. Also, they support group chats which help me coordinate with teams effectively.

Suggestion: Clarify vocabulary and structure: start with a topic sentence, then explain methods with examples. Use correct terms like 'reviews' and 'online' and linking words such as 'for example' and 'depending on'.

Example: I usually find apps by reading online reviews and checking app store ratings. For example, if I need a photo app I search the App Store and read reviews to compare features. Depending on the situation I may also ask friends for recommendations.

Suggestion: Make a concise prediction with clear reasons and examples. Use precise verbs and avoid fillers. Structure as: future preference + reason + specific examples of tasks the apps will do.

Example: In the future I would like to use more AI-powered apps like ChatGPT or Gemini. I believe they will help me with tasks such as creating photos and editing videos, and they can also assist with writing and problem-solving. Therefore I plan to try them for both work and personal projects.

× I always use Telegram, uh, to see the news and uh, uh, use WhatsApp to communicate with my colleagues or my friends and uh, transfer documents.

✓ I always use Telegram to read the news and WhatsApp to communicate with my colleagues and friends and to transfer documents.

Original sentence mixes parallel structures and omits required 'to' before infinitives; 'see the news' is less natural than 'read the news'. Maintain parallel infinitive forms: 'to read', 'to communicate', 'to transfer'.

× because I can, uh, easily send messages to my friend, uh, or to my colleagues.

✓ because I can easily send messages to my friends or to my colleagues.

Singular 'my friend' conflicts with plural 'colleagues' and context suggests multiple recipients. Use plural 'friends' for consistency and naturalness.

× Uh, actually, uh, when I at work, uh, I use this app to send files, uh, a set of, uh, emailing because I think.

✓ When I am at work, I use this app to send files and to manage emails.

Original lacks auxiliary verb 'am' for 'when I am at work' and contains unclear phrase 'a set of emailing because I think'. Recast to clear coordinated infinitives 'to send files and to manage emails'.

× Actually, I reviewed the comment and uh, obsession Internet to find out the best apps and uh, to be honest, uh, it depends on the situation.

✓ Actually, I read the comments and searched the Internet to find the best apps; to be honest, it depends on the situation.

'Reviewed the comment' is incorrect collocation; use 'read the comments'. 'Obsession Internet' is wrong; intended 'searched the Internet'. Use past tense verbs consistently and clear punctuation.

× Uh, when I for example, uh, need a photo app, uh, use the App Store to find.

✓ For example, when I need a photo app, I use the App Store to find one.

Missing subject 'I' before 'use' and missing object 'one' after 'find'. Starting phrase 'For example' is more natural at beginning.

× Uh, I think it's a quiet interesting because I, I, umm, very think about at this and uh, I think that in the future I use more AI apps such as a group ChatGPT or Gemini, uh, because, uh, they do anything for me, such as, uh, photo creating, video creating.

✓ I think it's quite interesting because I often think about this, and I believe that in the future I will use more AI apps such as ChatGPT or Gemini because they can do many things for me, such as creating photos and videos.

Multiple issues: 'quiet' should be 'quite' (adverb), awkward phrasing 'very think about at this' corrected to 'often think about this'. Future intention requires 'will use' (future tense). 'do anything for me' is inaccurate; use 'can do many things'. Gerund forms corrected to 'creating photos and videos'.

× I used, uh, recently Telegram and WhatsApp to check my, uh, notification And uh, I always use Telegram, uh, to see the news and uh, uh, use WhatsApp to communicate with my colleagues or my friends and uh, transfer documents.

✓ I recently used Telegram and WhatsApp to check my notifications. I always use Telegram to read the news and WhatsApp to communicate with my colleagues and friends and to transfer documents.

'Notification' should be plural 'notifications' because multiple alerts are typical. Also split into two sentences for clarity and corrected parallel structure 'to read', 'to communicate', 'to transfer'.

× Actually, I like the messaging apps such as WhatsApp, uh, Telegram, uh, because I can, uh, easily send messages to my friend, uh, or to my colleagues.

✓ Actually, I like messaging apps such as WhatsApp and Telegram because I can easily send messages to my friends or to my colleagues.

Use 'messaging apps' without 'the' for general statement. Use 'and' between examples. Change 'my friend' to plural 'my friends' for consistency.