App— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be clearer and more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence naming the specific apps, then briefly explain why you use them with one or two specific details. Reduce hesitations and avoid filler words.

Example: Recently I have used several apps for study and hobbies. For studying, I use a coding app called SoloLearn to practice programming exercises; for hobbies, I use Procreate on my tablet to sketch. These apps help me improve my coding skills and develop my art portfolio.

Suggestion: Answer the question directly by naming the kinds of apps first (e.g., coding practice and drawing apps), then give clear reasons and an example. Use linking words like "because" or "for example" and avoid irrelevant phrases about the App Store or questions back to the examiner.

Example: I am usually interested in coding practice apps and drawing apps. Coding apps help me practice algorithms and learn new programming languages, while drawing apps like Procreate let me sketch and experiment with digital art. For example, I recently started using an app that teaches Python through short exercises.

Suggestion: Give a clear, structured answer: state the main ways you discover apps, then add a brief example for each. Remove hesitations and unclear phrases; use linking words such as "often" and "also" to connect ideas.

Example: I usually find new apps through short videos on social media and recommendations from friends. For instance, I saw a short tutorial on TikTok about a sketching app, and a friend recommended a coding app that helped me prepare for exams.

Suggestion: State your future preferences straightforwardly and give specific app types or names along with reasons why you want to use them. Limit to two to three sentences and avoid repetitions and fillers.

Example: In the future, I would like to use more coding practice apps and advanced development tools. For example, I plan to use Android Studio to build mobile apps and Procreate to improve my digital illustration skills because both will support my studies and creative projects.

× Let me think you know, as a college student I need to some apps to learn my knowledge.

✓ Let me think. As a college student, I need some apps to help me learn.

The original sentence has extra discourse filler 'you know' placed incorrectly and the phrase 'need to some apps' is ungrammatical. This is a sentence structure and word choice issue. Use a period to separate the filler and start a new sentence, remove 'to' before 'some apps', and add 'help me' to show purpose. Improve by practicing concise sentences and correct verb patterns (need + noun or need to + verb).

× For example, whereas code or vision machine.

✓ For example, coding apps or computer vision apps.

'Whereas' is incorrectly used and the nouns are awkward. This is an incorrect word choice/adjective use issue. Replace with clearer noun phrases: 'coding apps' and 'computer vision apps'. Ensure the examples match the noun 'apps'.

× In addition, I usually use some apps to take my hobbies for.

✓ In addition, I usually use some apps for my hobbies.

The original uses the incorrect pattern 'use apps to take my hobbies for', which is ungrammatical. This is a sentence structure error. Correct structure is 'use apps for (my) hobbies'. Practice common prepositional patterns: 'for' with hobbies, not 'to take ... for'. Also remove unnecessary words.

× Are you sure the Apple store and watching review videos to find new apps?

✓ I usually go to the App Store and watch review videos to find new apps.

This sentence begins with 'Are you sure', which makes no sense in context; word order and verb forms are incorrect. It's a sentence structure error. Use subject 'I' and verbs 'go' and 'watch' to describe habitual actions. Also correct 'Apple store' to 'App Store'.

× I often interested in coding per practice apps because they help me learn new pro programming skills and join apps because I like sketching on my table.

✓ I am often interested in coding practice apps because they help me learn new programming skills, and drawing apps because I like sketching on my tablet.

'I often interested' lacks the auxiliary verb 'am' (subject-verb agreement / tense issue). 'per practice' is wrong word choice; 'pro programming' is redundant and awkward. 'Join apps' is incorrect; context implies 'drawing' or 'painting' apps. 'Table' should be 'tablet'. Fix by inserting 'am', choosing correct nouns, and maintaining parallel structure in the list.

× Recently I found an Apple code.

✓ Recently I found an app for coding on the App Store.

'Found an Apple code' is unclear and ungrammatical. It's a sentence structure and word choice error. Clarify intent: likely found a coding app on the App Store. Use 'app for coding' or 'coding app' and specify location 'on the App Store' if needed.

× Uh, recently I find the apps in the short videos, umm, I uh, recently I, I'm learning catching skills.

✓ Recently I found apps in short videos; I'm learning catching skills.

The sentence mixes present and past incorrectly: 'recently I find' should be past 'found' to match 'recently'. This is a tense error. Also streamline fillers. Use consistent tense: past for 'found' and present continuous for 'I'm learning'.

× In addition, my friend usually in create some apps actually to uh, inside my friend's pretending apps.

✓ In addition, my friend usually creates some apps; actually, he shows them inside his demo apps.

This sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Problems include incorrect verb form 'in create', wrong prepositions, and unclear phrasing 'pretending apps'. This is sentence structure and word choice errors. Use correct verb form 'creates', clarify who 'he' is if needed, and replace 'pretending' with likely 'demo' or 'prototype'.

× Uh, let me think, uh, about my, umm, programming class.

✓ Let me think about my programming class.

Excessive filler words and commas break the sentence. This is a sentence structure/style issue. Remove unnecessary fillers to form a clear response.

× I usually I maybe to use some code practice apps and more joining apps, for example Procreate or Android Studio.

✓ I will probably use some code-practice apps and more creative apps, for example Procreate or Android Studio.

Original has incorrect modal/infinitive structure 'I usually I maybe to use' and 'joining apps' is unclear. This involves modal verb usage and incorrect verb forms; categorized here as verb + -ing because 'joining' is wrong and should be an adjective 'creative' or a gerund when appropriate. Use 'will probably' for future intention, or 'may' + base verb: 'I may use'. Also 'Android Studio' is a development environment (not a hobby app) but can remain as example if intended. Improve by choosing correct modal and noun forms.