Party— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng cách và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và các chi tiết hỗ trợ liên kết mạch lạc.

Example: Yes, I love going to parties. When I was a child, my parents usually celebrated my birthday by inviting many friends and neighbors. These parties were always fun and beautifully decorated, making them very memorable.

Suggestion: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì quá khứ phù hợp và tránh câu không hoàn chỉnh. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về tần suất và trải nghiệm của bạn.

Example: When I was a kid, I usually had a party once a year to celebrate my birthday. Besides that, I often attended parties hosted by my friends. Among all, my own birthday parties were the most memorable because I invited all my classmates and we played many games together.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời cần sử dụng thì quá khứ đơn chính xác và câu hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên tránh câu ngắn và rời rạc, thay vào đó hãy kết nối các ý với nhau để câu trả lời tự nhiên và rõ ràng hơn.

Example: Yes, I organized a big party when I turned fifteen. I invited many friends from my classes, and they gave me lots of beautiful presents. It was a very special and enjoyable celebration.

× my parents usually celebrate my birthday parties and invited many friends and neighborhoods with their friends going around

✓ my parents usually celebrated my birthday parties and invited many friends and neighbors with their friends going around

The sentence describes past habitual actions, so the verbs should be in the past tense. 'Celebrate' should be 'celebrated' and 'neighborhoods' is incorrect; the correct word is 'neighbors'.

× invited many friends and neighborhoods with their friends going around

✓ invited many friends and neighbors with their friends going around

'Neighborhoods' refers to areas, but the intended meaning is people living nearby, so 'neighbors' is correct here.

× Parties are very beautiful and expensive, although it's very fun

✓ Parties are very beautiful and expensive, although they are very fun

'It's' refers to singular, but 'parties' is plural, so 'they are' should be used. Also, 'fun' is an adjective here and does not need 'very' but it is acceptable; the main issue is pronoun agreement.

× When I was a kid, I usually have a party once a year, mainly to celebrate my birthday party

✓ When I was a kid, I usually had a party once a year, mainly to celebrate my birthday

The sentence refers to past habitual action, so 'have' should be 'had'. Also, 'celebrate my birthday party' is redundant; 'celebrate my birthday' is correct.

× I also attend many parties hosted by my friends

✓ I also attended many parties hosted by my friends

Since the context is past ('when I was a kid'), the verb should be in past tense 'attended'.

× It's very fun and enjoyable, but the most memorable

✓ It was very fun and enjoyable, but the most memorable was my birthday

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a clear subject for 'the most memorable'. It should specify what was most memorable.

× I think it's my birthday because I invited all my classes and we play many games

✓ I think it was my birthday because I invited all my classmates and we played many games

'Classes' refers to groups of courses, but the intended meaning is 'classmates' (people). Also, verb tenses should be past ('was', 'played').

× Yes, I have organized a party when I was a kid

✓ Yes, I organized a party when I was a kid

The present perfect 'have organized' is not appropriate with a specific past time 'when I was a kid'. Simple past 'organized' should be used.

× It's about my birthday become fifteen

✓ It was about my fifteenth birthday

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The corrected sentence clearly expresses the intended meaning.

× Yeah, and I organize a big party

✓ Yeah, and I organized a big party

The action happened in the past, so the verb should be in past tense 'organized'.

× Invited many friends around my classes and they gave me a lot of beautiful presents

✓ I invited many friends from my classes and they gave me a lot of beautiful presents

The sentence lacks a subject and proper structure. Adding 'I' and correcting 'around my classes' to 'from my classes' improves clarity and grammar.